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IMERSION THIS SUMMER (WRITING EXERCISE) PLEASE SOMEONE, CAN CORRECT MY WRITING?? THANK YOU!!!! Dear Student, This is Katherine, owner of the house you’ll live in. It’ll be great to have you here with us. I think the best time for you to stay here would be from 1st until 15th August. We are looking forward to your visit! Katherine Write an e-mail to Katherine, in which you: - Show your enthusiasm - Explain why you can’t go when she suggests - Suggest what you could do Dear Katherine I` m Susana , I`m student that i will be live with you some days, I´m thrilled to bits os can to be there and I´m really happy waiting my trip. However, I couldn´t go in that dates because I´m working in the evenig in a Italy restaurant for summer and I don´t finish until 30th August. Please accept my apologies because i have been waiting this experience a lot of time. I could do it from 1st until 15th September. I hope that you have thhis free time for my and I can travel soon. Thank you so much for you atention. Susana

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IMMERSION THIS SUMMER (WRITING EXERCISE)

PLEASE SOMEONE, CAN CORRECT MY WRITING?? THANK YOU!!!!

Dear Student, This is Katherine, owner of the house you’ll live in. It’ll be great to have you here with us. I think the best time for you to stay here would be from 1st until 15th August. We are looking forward to your visit! Katherine!

Write an e-mail to Katherine, in which you:
- Show your enthusiasm
- Explain why you can’t go when she suggests
- Suggest what you could do

Dear Katherine

I` m Susana , I`m a student that i will be living with you some for a few days, I´m thrilled to bits os that I can to be there and I´m really happy waiting for my trip.

However, I couldn´t go in that on those dates because I´m working in the evening in a Italy an Italian restaurant for the summer and I don´t finish until 30th August. Please accept my apologies because I have been waiting a long time for this experience a lot of time.
I could do it from 1st until 15th September.

I hope that you have this free time free for me and I can travel soon.

Thank you so much for you attention.

Susana


Very good Susana. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue and grey.

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