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Homemade food I remember mother’s meals. They were tasty, healthy and the most important they were made with love. Nowadays we’re living too fast, so we don’t have time for cooking, as a result ours meals are junk food. All my live I have liked cooking, in fact for me it’s a moment of relaxation. Sunday is my day, I usually cook “paella”, which is a meal made with rice, chicken or rabbit and vegetables. I prepare all ingredients for make it and, of course, a pair of beers and a little appetizer that I eat while I cook. I turn on my mobile phone and I tune in the station LBC radio, then I light my cigar and begin cooking. It’s like a ceremony, it’s my moment and nobody can disturb me while I’m cooking because I get angry if someone come to see how it’s going the meal. I believe that everybody should find something for relaxing himself. Life is not only work and there’re little things that can made us more happy, we only have to see around us and surely we’ll be able to find it.

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Homemade Food

I remember my mother’s meals. They were tasty, healthy and the  most importantly, they were made with love. Nowadays, we’re living too fast, so we don’t have time for cooking, and as a result ours meals are junk food.
All my live life I have liked cooking. In fact, for me it’s a moment of relaxation. Sunday is my the day I usually cook “paella”, which is a meal made with rice, chicken or rabbit and vegetables. I prepare all ingredients for with which to make it and, of course, a pair couple of beers, and as well as a  little appetizer that I eat while I cook. I turn on my mobile phone and I tune in the station LBC radio, then I light my cigar and begin cooking. It’s like a ceremony. It’s my moment, and nobody can disturb me while I’m cooking because I get angry if someone comes to see how the meal is going.  it’s going the meal.
I believe that everybody should find something for relaxing for himself. Life is not only work and there are little things that can made make us more happy. We only have to see look around us and surely we’ll be able we're sure to find it.


I didn't correct it perfectly,  but here are a few things I noticed. Keep up the hard work!

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 Hi Santiago, 

Homemade food

I remember mother’s meals. They were tasty, healthy and the most importantly, they were made with love. Nowadays we’re living too fast, so we don’t have time for cooking. As a result ours meals are  tend to be fast food or junk food.
All my live life I have liked cooking. In fact for me it’s a moment of relaxation. Sunday is my cooking day.  I usually cook “paella”, which is a meal made with rice, chicken or rabbit and vegetables. I prepare all  the ingredients for make  making it and, of course, a pair  couple of beers and a little appetizer that I eat while I cook. I turn on my mobile phone and I tune in to  the station LBC radio,then I  light my cigar and begin cooking. It’s like a ceremony.It’s my moment and nobody can disturb me while I’m cooking because I get angry if someone comes to see how it’s going the meal.   the meal is coming along.
I believe that everybody should find something for relaxing  to relax himself.oneself .Life is not only about   work and there’re little things that can made us more happy happier. we only have to see  lookaround us and surely we’ll be able to find it.

Good story Santiago!  Be careful with too many comma seperations  between thoughts and instead  use more periods like I did in the correction. This is my opinion . Other English speakesr may think differently. Otherwise , I just added some  native speaker style to what you already expressed.


Reminder : my marked corrections are  just one way  to express your ideas. Other native speakers will surely have other ways to express this. 


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Homemade food

I remember my mother’s meals. They were tasty, healthy and the most importantly they were made with love. Nowadays we’re living too fast, so we don’t have time for cooking, as a result ours meals are often junk food.
All my life I have liked cooking, in fact for me it’s a moment of relaxation. Sunday is the day, I usually cook “paella”, which is a meal made with rice, chicken or rabbit and vegetables. I prepare all ingredients that are needed to make it and, of course, I have a couple of beers and a little appetizer that I eat while I cook. I turn on my mobile phone and I tune in to the station LBC radio, then I light my cigar and begin cooking. It’s like a ceremony, it’s my moment and nobody can disturb me while I’m cooking because I get angry if someone come to see how it’s going the meal is coming along.
I believe that everybody should find something to relax oneself. for relaxing himself. Life is not only about  work and there are little things that can made us more happy, we only have to look around us and surely we’ll be able to find them.. (little things = plural)

Excellent Santiago, you have made me hungry I wish I could have that paella for my dinner.

Another option could be. ''I remember my mothers cooking'' ''I remember the meals that my mother used to make''

A couple of beers while cooking sounds a great idea.

Best wishes

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