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What I feel It has been a month since I came back to Japan. I went back to my parents house for a while, and spend a lot of time with my family. Now, I came back to Tokyo where I used to live before study abroad in Canada. I'm looking for a job here. I want to try a job needs English next time. I'm planning to take a test called "Japan National Tourisum Organization" in future. I'm going to start to work and am going to study about the test as well. There is a English class which I join in these days so that to keep my English. I know how difficult to keep and improve English in non-native country such as Japan. However I feel my English is getting better more than I was in Canada. I think it's time to go over first step. I took a year to get here. Next, I need to practice and repeat again. It is the only way to learn language. I might not have enough time after starting to work, but I'll do my best as much as I can. By the way, I gained 8kg during the study abroad in Canada... I'm focusing on to cut my weight right now.lol

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However I feel my English is getting better more than I it was in Canada.  (This sentence is slightly awkward because "getting better" is usually not used with "more".  "getting better" is already like a continuing change.  so "getting better more" is too much.  "improving more than" is better.  Also, you switch the reference of the comparison from "my English" to "I" which doesn't sound right, so instead "it".  "I feel my English is improving faster than it was in Canada."  "I feel my English is better than it was when I was in Canada.")
I think it's time to go over my/the first step. I took a year to get here.  (I'm not sure what you mean here.  Do you mean something like "return to basics"?  "review fundamentals"?  Or do you mean "take the first step" in your continuing studies?)
Next, I need to practice and repeat again. It is the only way to learn a language.("a language" or "learn languages")

I might not have enough time after starting to work, but I'll do my best as much as I can.

By the way, I gained 8kg during the study abroad in Canada...
I'm focusing on to cutting my weight right now.lol  (Or: "I'm focusing on trying to cut my weight")
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What I feel

It has been a month since I came back to Japan.
I went back to my parents house for a while, and spend spent a lot of time with my family.
Now, I came have come back to Tokyo where I used to live before study abroad in Canada.("It can't be past tense "came" with "Now".  Also "before studying abroad in Canada" sounds slightly better.  "before Study Abroad in Canada" would be okay because then its like a thing.)
I'm looking for a job here. I want to try a job that needs/requires English next this time. ("next time" is confusing because you're looking for a job now.  I'm not sure how it is with 日本語, 今度？次の？ but here, you want "this time" I think.)

I'm planning to take a test called "Japan National Tourism Organization" in the future.(It sounds like that's not the name of the test but the name of the organization that gives the test.  So "...to take a test from the 'Japan National Tourism Organization'")
I'm going to start to work and I am going to study about for the test as well.(Or: "I'm going to start to work and study for the test as well."  But with "am going" you need to repeat the subject "I".  "about" is more like ついて, I'm not sure if you could use that there in Japanese.  "ask about the test" means to ask someone for more information, what kind of questions are on the test, etc..  "worried about the test", maybe you don't know how you will do yet, or whether you've studied enough.  "prepare for the test", etc.)
There is an English class which I joined in these daysrecently so that to keep my English. (I assume you already joined it, otherwise "which I will join".  "These days" is usually only used at the beginning of sentences, like "Lately, " or also "Recently, "  Actually, it is used elsewhere in the sentence too.  "I haven't been studying much these days".  But there's no "in" with "these days".  "so that" and "to" don't make sense here.  "so that I can keep my English up"  "in order to keep my English fresh/sharp".  I think "that" usually has a real clause afterwards with a subject, verb, object, etc.. I'm not sure if this is right, but I think of "that" like こと a little, not literally, but just in terms of its clausal relationship in a sentence.)
I know how difficult it is to keep and improve English in a non-native country such as Japan.  (Or: "I know how difficult keeping and improving my English will be in Japan")

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What I feel

It has been a month since I came back to Japan.
I went back to my parents house for a while, and spend a lot of time with my family.
Now, I came back to Tokyo where I used to live before I went to study abroad in Canada. before study abroad in Canada
I'm looking for a job here. I want to try a job that requires English next time. needs English next time.

I'm planning to take a test called "Japan National Tourisum Organization" in the future.
I'm going to start to work and I'm going to study for (about) the test as well.
There is a English class which I joined to improve my Enlgish.  (in these days so that to keep my English.)
I know how difficult it is to keep and improve English in a non-native country such as Japan.
However I feel like my English is getting better, even more so than It was in Canada.
I think it's time to go over the first step. I took a year to get here.
Next, I need to practice and repeat again, It is the only way to learn language.

I might not have enough time after I start to work , but I'll do my best as much as I can.

By the way, I gained 8kg during the study abroad in Canada...
I'm focusing on cutting my weight right now.lol

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