Madlen
I’m married second time, my husband loves me. And I love him too, I guess. Maybe I loved my first husband stronger, but I was younger and it was the first time. The first feelings can't be forgotten.
I am a very energetic woman, I love to talk a lot and I love to meet people. Not everyone understands this, not everyone likes it. But this is I.
I love my children, I want that they be happy. I try to spend a lot of time with them, so I don't want to work all day. I want to spend more time with my family. I want that my children to trust me and shared with me. I don't want that Abigail was moving away from me, I want to be her friend. She communicates with anyone, asks to anyone for help, not me. I don't know how I can fix this situation.
I understand Jane, I was in the same situation, I know how difficult it is for her, how hard it is to be a single mother, I want to support her. Perhaps there are some problems with her son, but certainly we can't say it. And if it turns out that Renata's daughter was lying, and if we don't support Jane now, she will fall into depression as her son. So I want to support her, to show that not everyone in this town is bad people. I want to help her to join our circle. And Renata is a person who wants to be on top, she wants to control people. She thinks all power in her hands. But she's wrong. I won't let her break us and i will protect Jane.
Celeste though is my friend, but I see that she and her husband have some problems. She advises me and my husband to go to the psychologist. But, I think that them need to go to the psychologist.
I try to help people, to be a good friend and a great mom.
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Madlen
I’m married second time, my husband loves me. And I love him too, I guess. Maybe I loved my first husband stronger, but I was younger and it was the first time. The first feelings can't be forgotten.I am a very energetic woman, I love to talk a lot and meet people. Not everyone understands this, not everyone likes it. But this is who I am.
I love my children, I want them be happy. I try to spend as much time with them as possible, so I don't want to work all day. I want to spend more time with my family. I want that my children to trust me and share with me. I didn't want Abigail to move away from me, I want to be her friend. She communicates with anyone and asks anyone for help but me. I don't know how I can fix this situation.
I understand Jane, I was in the same situation, I know how difficult it is for her, how hard it is to be a single mother, I want to support her. Perhaps there are some problems with her son, but certainly we can't say it. And if it turns out that Renata's daughter was lying, and if we don't support Jane now, she will fall into depression as her son. So I want to support her, to show that not everyone in this town is bad people. I want to help her to join our circle. And Renata is a person who wants to be on top, she wants to control people. She thinks all power is in her hands. But she's wrong. I won't let her break us and i will protect Jane.
Celeste though is my friend, but I see that she and her husband have some problems. She advises me and my husband to go to the psychologist. But, I think that they need to go to the psychologist.
I try to help people, to be a good friend and a great mom.
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My friend Jane is a single mother. I understand her Jane, I was in the same situation., I know how difficult it is for her, how hard it is to be a single mother, and I want to support her. Perhaps there are some problems with her son, but certainly we can't say for sure if there are it. We need to support Jane now because And if it turns out that Renata's daughter was lying, and if we don't support Jane now, she will fall into depression just like as her son. So I want to support her, to show that not everyone in this town are is bad people. I want to help her to join our circle. And Renata is a person who wants to be on top;, she wants to control people. She thinks she has all the power in her hands,. But she's wrong. I won't let her break us and i I will protect Jane.
Celeste though is my friend, but I can see that she and her husband have some problems. She says that advises me and my husband and I should to go to a marriage counselor the psychologist., bBut, I think that they are the ones who them who need to go to therapy. the psychologist.
I try to help people, to be a good friend and to be a great mom.
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Madlen
I’m married for the second time, and my husband loves me. And I love him too, I guess. Maybe I loved my first husband more stronger, but I was younger and it was the my first time being in love. The Those first feelings can't be forgotten.
I am a very energetic woman;, I love to talk a lot and I love to meet people. Not everyone understands this, not everyone likes it. But that's this is me I.
I love my children and, I want them to that they be happy. I like try to spend a lot of time with them, so I don't want to work all day. I want to spend more time with my family. I want that my children to trust me and shared things with me. I don't want that Abigail and I to grow apart; was moving away from me, I want to be her friend. She talks communicates with anyone, and asks to anyone for help from everyone except me., not me. I don't know how I can fix this situation.
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