Destiny
風吹葉落各自飛, When the wind blows, each leaf takes off on its own,
降到何處難以卜. Difficult it is to predict where it lands.
若遠萬里隔山河. If a far, ten thousand miles apart separated by mountains and rivers,
有緣相近伴身傍! If so fated, so near that we touched one another.
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Destiny
風吹葉落各自飛,
降到何處難以卜.。
若遠萬里隔山河.，
有緣相近伴身傍!。
風吹葉落各自散，
葬與何處欲卜難。
若未隔萬里河山，
自能有緣近相伴。
I m sorry I cant correct your English ,you know why. haha
My correction is very rhyme in Mandarin.
Also, you have to notice your punctuation in Chinese.
Of cource, I was amazed by your own poem! Very!
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The poem is written by yourself？good job！
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風吹葉落各自飛（fei）,
降到何處難以卜（bu）.
纵使萬里隔山河（he）.
有緣相近伴身傍（bang）!
It looks not rhyme。。。
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@Linda: It's all fated either to be close or to be far apart and we cannot do anything about it.
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Why I felt so sad when I was reading these centences.
Maybe because I am in a sad mood.
About this poem,if you are in good moon,you will focus this part of “有緣相近伴身傍! If so fated, so near that we touched one another. ”，or you will focus the "若遠萬里隔山河. If a far, ten thousand miles apart separated by mountains and rivers, " part. This is that there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes ,right?
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感觉这首诗，缺了点什么。
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