haircut
Finally I can get a haircut!! I'm so excited about it :) I know short hair looks better on me rather than long hair. Then I have to dye my hair anyway. I've got a new job yesterday, they said to me my hair is too bright. I like my hair is black, my natural hair color is a little bit brown though . I used to dye like a blond hair when I was in Uni. But now I don't like to dye my hair any color. anyway I can't wait having a haircut !!!
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haircut
Finally I can get a haircut!! I'm so excited about it :) I know short hair looks better on me rather than long hair. Then I have to dye my hair anyway. I've got a new job yesterday, they said to me my hair is too bright. I like my hair is black, my natural hair color is a little bit brown though . I used to dye like a blond hair when I was in Uni. But now I don't like to dye my hair any color. anyway I can't wait having a haircut !!!Finally I can get a haircut!! I'm so excited about it :) I know short hair looks better than long hair on me. I have to dye my hair anyway. I got a new job yesterday. They told me that my hair is too bright. I like my hair black. My natural hair color is more brown. I used to dye my hair blonde when I was in Uni. I don't like to dye my hair any color right now. I can't wait to have a haircut!!
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haircut
Finally I can get a haircut!! I'm so excited about it :) I know short hair looks better on me rather than long hair. ("rather" is awkward here with "better". "better" usually goes with "than". I think you can use "rather" with "better" and "than" if there's a longer clause, not a comparison between things like "short hair" and "long hair". For instance: "Its better to vote rather than have someone you don't want to be elected win" But you still don't need the "rather" with "better" and "than" even with a long clause.) Then I have to dye my hair anyway. I've got a new job yesterday, they said to me my hair is too bright. I like my hair is black, my natural hair color is a little bit brown though (Or: "I like my hair when it is black"). I used to dye it like a blond hair when I was in Uni.("Uni" is an uncommon shorthand for University. You could also say "I used to dye my hair blonde" But you don't need "like" because its a hair color, its not similar to that hair color, it is that hair color.) But now I don't like to dye my hair any color. anyway I can't wait having to have a haircut !!!Want to progress faster?
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