我的下一次旅行
今年我住的地方特别冷，但是这里经常不冷不热。一直春天下雨。 我想念热的天气，我跟我的家庭想好去一些热地方。我不看好我的妈妈， 我的爸爸 和 我的妹妹很久了！
明天我打算准备我的旅行和买礼物。我也必须带来很多东西，因为我妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。 她只能在这里买。 昨天是爸爸的生日。我很高兴能给他一个礼物。
Where I live is unusually (especially) cold this year but it's usually not cold and not hot here.
It has been raining all the time in spring. I miss the hot weather so my family and I decided to go to somewhere hot. I have not seen my mom, my dad and my sister for a long time！
Tomorrow I plan to prepare for my trip and buy a gift. I also have to bring a lot of stuffs because my mom really like some stuffs from here. She can only get them from here. Yesterday was my dad's birthday. I'm very happy that I can give him a gift this year.
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我的下一次旅行
今年我住的地方特别冷，但是这里经常通常不冷不热。一直春天一直下雨。 我想念热的天气，我跟我的家庭家人想好去一些热的地方。我不看沒見到好我的妈妈， 我的爸爸 和 我的妹妹很久了！明天我打算准备我的旅行和买礼物。我也必须带来回很多东西，因为我妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。 ，而她只能在这里买。 昨天是爸爸的生日。我很高兴能给（用"送"較文雅）他一个礼物。
Where I live is unusually (especially) cold this year but it's usually not cold and not hot here.
It has been raining all the time in spring. I miss the hot weather so my family and I decided to go to somewhere hot. I have not seen my mom, my dad and my sister for a long time！
Tomorrow I plan to prepare for my trip and buy a gift. I also have to bring a lot of stuffs because my mom really like some stuffs from here. She can only get them from here. Yesterday was my dad's birthday. I'm very happy that I can give him a gift this year.
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我的下一次旅行
今年我住的地方特别冷，但是这里经常通常是不冷不热比较温和的。一直今年春天一直在下雨。 我想念热的天气，因此我跟我的家庭想好了去一些热地方。我不看好没有见到我的妈妈，、 我的爸爸， 和我的妹妹很久了！明天我打算准备我的旅行和并买些礼物。我也必须带来上很多东西，因为我妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。 她只能在这里买到。 昨天是爸爸的生日。我很高兴今年能送给他一个礼物。
Where I live is unusually (especially) cold this year but it's usually not cold and not hot here. It has been raining all the time in spring. I miss the hot weather so my family and I decided to go to somewhere hot. I have not seen my mom, my dad and my sister for a long time！
Tomorrow I plan to prepare for my trip and buy a gift. I also have to bring a lot of stuffs because my mom really like some stuffs from here. She can only get them from here. Yesterday was my dad's birthday. I'm very happy that I can give him a gift this year.
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我的下一次旅行
今年我住的地方特别冷（This sentence means the new place where I live this year is very cold），但是这里经常（we use “经常”express frequency ,eg:我经常看电影，春天经常下雨。）不冷不热。我住的地方今年特别冷，但是这里通常不冷不热。
一直春天下雨。
春天一直下雨。（“一直”is a adv. We usually put it in front of v. eg: 我一直喜欢你。 我一直在这里买东西。 ）
我想念热的天气，我跟我的家庭想好去一些热的地方。
我不看好我的妈妈， 我的爸爸 和 我的妹妹很久了！（“看好"：look to further increase eg:我看好你的未来。 丽丽看公司的发展前景。 ）
我很久没见到我的妈妈、（我的）爸爸和（我的）妹妹了。
明天我打算准备我的旅行和买礼物。
明天我打算准备我的行李or旅行的东西
我也必须带来很多东西，因为我妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。
我也必须带去很多东西。
我也必须带回去很多东西。
她只能在这里买。
昨天是爸爸的生日。我很高兴能给（送）他一个礼物。（We always use “送”match “礼物”）
Where I live is unusually (especially) cold this year but it's usually not cold and not hot here.
It has been raining all the time in spring. I miss the hot weather so my family and I decided to go to somewhere hot. I have not seen my mom, my dad and my sister for a long time！
Tomorrow I plan to prepare for my trip and buy a gift. I also have to bring a lot of stuffs because my mom really like some stuffs from here. She can only get them from here. Yesterday was my dad's birthday. I'm very happy that I can give him a gift this year.
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Not the case. 在 here is a grammar particel which means ...ing, that is continuous tense. =[in English]It had been raining all the time this spring. If you say,[in En]'Spring rain all the time.' that makes no sence, so you should at least add some grammatic usage in a sentence. Just like your next sentece 想好去一些地方, since here is not for general declaration(which will be always present tense), you should add +了 to mean the past tense/mood. =[En]We decided to ... NOT We decide to...
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我的下一次旅行
今年我住的地方特别冷，但是这里经常不冷不热。（我住的城市今年特别冷，不像往常一样温暖。）
一直春天下雨。 我想念热的天气，我跟我的家庭想好去一些热地方。
（在春天一直下雨。我很想念暖和的天气，我和我的家人决定去暖和的地方去旅行。）
我不看好我的妈妈， 我的爸爸 和 我的妹妹很久了！明天我打算准备我的旅行和买礼物。
（我很久没有见我的爸爸妈妈还有妹妹了。明天我打算收拾行李还有为他们买礼物。）
我也必须带来很多东西，因为我妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。 她只能在这里买。 昨天是爸爸的生日。我很高兴能给他一个礼物。
（我必须带很多东西回去，因为我的妈妈真的很喜欢这里的东西。她只能在这里买。昨天是我爸爸的生日，我很高兴今年能送他礼物。）
Where I live is unusually (especially) cold this year but it's usually not cold and not hot here.
It has been raining all the time in spring. I miss the hot weather so my family and I decided to go to somewhere hot. I have not seen my mom, my dad and my sister for a long time！
Tomorrow I plan to prepare for my trip and buy a gift. I also have to bring a lot of stuffs because my mom really like some stuffs from here. She can only get them from here. Yesterday was my dad's birthday. I'm very happy that I can give him a gift this year.
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