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A night in the city of Buenos Aires city
[Cities are referred to either by name alone or as "the city of..." Exceptions are if "city" is part of the name of the city, as with Mexico City]
Hello, Italki's community!
I return to write to you again after one month. It is a pleasure to post our notebooks notebook entries with the community so as to know our mistakes. It is a big aid to me because I have plenty to learn plenty of the English language.
In this moment, it is raining in Buenos Aires. It is a humidity humid and temperate night, like London in on some day of its autumn season ["on an autumn day" would be a little clearer and more concise]. Usually, I go out from my house to walk around the city, but the intensity of the rain was hard the rain was intense. Therefore, I couldn't go anywhere. In addition, I am listening to the song "Paradise" by the band Coldplay band. It is a great song, and I love it. It is able to make me feel good to feel good myself. It has a fantastic meaning to me. I have never seen a Coldplay concert. I'd like to go someone sometime, but It is a dream, because I am not working now. So I have to wait for that. I must find a job and save money to go it to one.
On the other hand, I was stroking to my dog, Otto, before I started to write this text. It He is very friendly and I like it a lot. It He gave me many kisses with its his large tongue. My face was completely full of covered with saliva. I had to go to the bathroom to wash all my face.
[Even for animals, it is preferential to use a gendered pronoun ("he" or "she") instead of the neuter pronoun ("it") when the gender of the animal is known. I'm assuming "he" because Otto is a male name]
For the moment, that's all! I don't have many ideas to write something about right now.
Bye bye!
Very good! Keep up the good work. Your English is very clear and understandable. Let me know if you have any questions.
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