Shall we watch a movie?
In the past few days, Chinese people enjoyed their Qingming Festival with a three-day holiday. Traditionally, Chinese people should visit the cemeteries of their ancestors, sweeping tombstones and mourning their lost family. That said, more and more people replacing it with trips now. It is unbelievable that so many people could swarm into one scenery spot that you cannot move freely. I don't see them as real tourists because they don't care the quality of their trip and the capacity of the scenery spots at all. But I do understand them. As well as watching a movie, we alway's don't care what we see but whom we with.
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Shall we watch a movie?
In the past few days, Chinese people have enjoyed their Qingming Festival with a three-day holiday. Traditionally, Chinese people should visit the cemeteries of their ancestors, sweeping tombstones and mourning their lost family. That said, more and more people are replacing it with trips now. It is unbelievable that so many people could swarm into one scenic (<--"Scenic" 是形容词。) spot that you others cannot move freely. I don't see them as real tourists, because they don't care about the quality of their trip and the capacity of the scenic spots at all. But (<--句子开头最好不要用连词。) However, I do understand them. As well as Similar to watching a movie, we alway's frequently don't care about what we see but whom we are with.
写得很好，Tony。你的英文很强！
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Shall we watch a movie?
In the past few days, Chinese people have enjoyed their Qingming Festival with a three-day holiday. Traditionally, Chinese people should visit the cemeteries of their ancestors', sweeping tombstones and mourning their lost family. That said, more and more people are replacing it with trips now. It is unbelievable that so many people could swarm into one scenic spot, that you cannot move freely. I don't see them as real tourists because they didn't care about the quality of their trip and the capacity of the scenery spots. But I do understand them. It is like watching a movie, we alway's don't care what we see but who we see it with.Hello Tony,
Interesting text about changing China.
Just a few small corrections
Bob
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