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My friend I have a friend. She is American. She came to Okinawa. She is very kind. So children likes her. And I like her. She said "I may be in Okinawa all the time." We were pleased!! We hoped she live in Okinawa. But…she will go to Tokyo at April 6th. We were very lamentable. So we made some presents. And we gave her presents. She was very pleased. We hope she will keep being healthy.

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My friend

I have a friend. She is American. She came to Okinawa.
She is very kind. So children likes her. And I like her.
She said "I may be in Okinawa all the time."
We were pleased!! We hoped she lives in Okinawa.
But…she will go to Tokyo at  on April 6th.
We were very lamentable lamented. So we made some presents. And we gave her presents.
She was very pleased.
We hope she will keep being healthy.

Lovely writing, well done, Charlotte 

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My friend

I have a friend who She is American. She came to Okinawa.
She is very kind. So My children likes her. And I like her.
She said "I may be in Okinawa all the time for a while."
We were pleased!! We hoped she lived in Okinawa.
But…she will go to Tokyo at  on April 6th.
We were very lamentable upset. So we made some presents to give her. And we gave her presents.
She was very pleased.
We hope she will keep being healthy.


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My friend

I have a friend. She is American. and she came to Okinawa.
She is very kind. So Children likes her. Aand I like her too
She said "I may come to live be in Okinawa all the time."
We were pleased!! We hoped she lives in Okinawa.
But…she will go to Tokyo at on April 6th.
We were very lamentable sad. So we made her some presents which. And we gave her presents.
She was very pleased.
We hope she will stay  healthy.

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