Yoshkar-Ola
Hey everybody. It is my 1st time that I have decide to write on the internet in English and I hope you will enjoy it (not with my english skills of course, i mean but that you'll enjoy my story) Well, I guess I need to say that this small city is the capital of the Mari El Republic, Russia. And I was there a week before and 1 day is enough to see all interesting places and other staff. BUT I was really enjoying this city!
Okay, let's go further! First of all we went to a square to see a Kremlin and famous river embankment. It was really cold for March but anyway it was amazing and I want to go there in summer 2017! Then we went to the another square with a wall clock. Every hour a toy donkey came out in and out of the doors!! It was incredible!! For me it was magical...maybe because I didn't expect it from this city!
And I guess these were all the interesting places in this city.... But wait! I haven't said anythig about food! ;)
I was in a cafe near the 1st square and there was very tasty food! This cafe is called "A Plate" (Pls don't ask me why, i don't know too haha). I ate pancackes, a cup of coffe, a cake ( as you noticed I'm in love with sweets) and carrot chips. In fact I thought that I had taken pear chips, but nope. Anyway it was tasty haha.
And one thing you should know: before your trip you should check where your railway station is, cos when I arrived with my friend at the railway, we discovered that it was a Moscow railway and we needed to go to another place (and yeah, we were going to be late as it was 30 minutes before the train).
Fortunatelly, we arrived to KAZAN railway in time. So take care and always smile!
See some photos of my trip on my instagram: elinsaahh
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Yoshkar-Ola
Hey everybody. This is the 1st time that I have decided to write on the internet in English and I hope you will enjoy it (not with my English skills of course, i mean but that you'll enjoy my story) Well, I guess I need to say that this small city is the capital of the Mari El Republic, Russia. And I was there a week before and 1 day is enough to see all the interesting places and other staff. BUT I was really enjoying this city!Okay, let's go further! First of all we went to a square to see a Kremlin and famous river embankment. It was really cold for March but anyway it was amazing and I want to go there in summer 2017! Then we went to another square with a wall clock. Every hour a toy donkey came out in and out of the doors! It was incredible!! For me, it was magical...maybe because I didn't expect it from this city!
And I guess these were all the interesting places in this city.... But wait! I haven't said anything about food! ;)
I was in a cafe near the 1st square and there was very tasty food! This cafe is called "A Plate" (Pls don't ask me why, i don't know, either haha). I ate pancakes, a cup of coffee, a cake ( as you noticed I'm in love with sweets) and carrot chips. In fact I thought that I had taken pear chips, but nope. Anyway it was tasty haha.
And one thing you should know: before your trip you should check where your railway statioan is, cos when I arrived with my friend at the railway, we discovered that it was a Moscow railway and we needed to go to another place (and yeah, we'were going to be late as it was 30 minutes before the train).
Fortunately, we arrived at KAZAN railway in time. So take care and always smile!
See some photos of my trip on my instagram: elinsaahh
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Yoshkar-Ola
Hey, everybody. This is the 1st time that I have decide to write something on the internet in English and I hope you will enjoy it (not with my English skills of course. I mean but that I hope you'll enjoy my story.) Well, I guess I need to say that this small city is the capital of the Mari El Republic, Russia. And I was there a week before and one day is enough to see all the interesting places and other stuff there. BUT I was really enjoyed this city!
Okay, let's go further! First of all, we went to a square to see a Kremlin and famous river embankment. It was really cold for March but anyway it was amazing and I want to go there in the summer of 2017! Then we went to another square with a wall clock. Every hour a toy donkey came out and went back in the doors several times!! It was incredible!! For me it was magical...maybe because I didn't expect it from this city!
And I guess these were all the interesting places in this city.... But wait! I haven't said anything about the food! (I would say "the food" so it is clear you mean "the food in this city" instead of food in general.) ;) I was in a cafe near the 1st square and there was very tasty food! This cafe is called "A Plate" (Pls This is okay for casual writing but use "please" in more formal stuff. don't ask me why. I don't know too haha). I ate pancakes, a cake ( as you may have noticed, I'm in love with sweets), and carrot chips and had/drank a cup of coffee. (You can't/don't eat coffee so I placed it at the end of the sentence so all the food items are together and so they all are linked to the same verb "ate".) Actually, I thought that I had taken pear chips, but nope. Anyway it was tasty haha.
And one thing you should know: before your trip you should check where your railway station is headed, cos (or "because" in formal writing) when I arrived with my friend at the railway, we discovered that it was a Moscow railway and we needed to go to another place (and yeah, we were going to be late as it was 30 minutes until the other train arrived).
Fortunatelly, we arrived to KAZAN railway in time. So take care and always smile!
See some photos of my trip on my instagram: elinsaahh
Great job! It sounds very conversational and real! Just like a conversation I would have with some of my friends. :)
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