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What do you think about that women are better than men ? These years scientists think women r better then men because they use better brain. l don t think so but sometimes l see that a woman can give logical answer and quickly when l ask her but l dont think so all women r like her.

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What do you think about the idea that women are better than men?

In recent years, some  scientists have contended that women are better then men, because they use their brains better / make better use of their brains / mental faculties. l don t think so, but sometimes l see that a woman can give a logical answer and does so quickly when l ask her, but l don't think so all women are like that.


The last sentence is what we call a "run-on sentence," because of the multiple use of conjunctions.  I would suggest a re-write, to remove the second instance of "but".  For example:  "I don't happen to agree.  Although it is true that I have sometimes found women to respond logically and quickly, I don't think all women are like that."



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