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Owners have to manage Their dog's behavior I went to a playground with my dog today. There was a family that had two golden retrievers. The mother asked me a permission to let them go and play without leads, and I answered 'Yes' because I wanted to play with my dog as same as theirs. When we started to play with a ball, one of the dogs ran and chased our ball. The other one also followed the first one, so my dog was terrified of them and let the ball go. The younger one took the ball in its mouth, but it didn't want to give the ball even though to its owner. Finally we took the ball back after for a while. I thought the younger dog was difficult to manage, so I decided to make a space with them. We moved to the other playground that was placed next to the biggest playground which the family is playing with the dogs. As soon as we started to playing again, the younger dog also came running towaed us again! The mother yelled it 'NO!!' and took it to their place, but it couldn't stop repeating running toward us! I was also terrified because it tried to get a ball and bit my elbow and my clothes! I couldn't tolerate the owner to let it be free anymore, and asked her to put leads on it if she couldn't manage it. Her face changed to be mad, so I said additional words to her about it bit me. To my surprise she answered 'just bit a clothing, right?'. Oh, my goodness... how could she say this word?? I was getting mad and also added 'it actually bit my elbow'. Finally she decided to go home.... After they leaving, we enjoyed playing at there, but I was still gloomy. I'm sure it will keep me up tonight.

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I was getting mad and also added, 'it actually bit my elbow'. Finally she decided to go home....
After they left, we enjoyed playing at there, but I was still gloomy. I'm sure it will keep me up tonight.

こんにちは〜　I'm so sorry to hear about this. I hope you're okay. That owner needs to properly train her dogs :( 

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Owners have to manage Their dog's behavior

I went to a playground with my dog today. There was a family that had two golden retrievers. The mother asked me afor permission to let them go and play without leads/leashes, and I answered 'Yes' because I wanted to play with my dog as same as theirs. (More natural "in the same way as they did" or just "because I similarly wanted to play with my dog (without a leash)")
When we started to play with a ball, one of the dogs ran and chased our ball. The other one also followed the first one, so my dog was terrified of them and let the ball go. The younger one took the ball in its mouth, but it didn't want to give the ball up even though to its owner.("give something up" can be a little similar to usages of 上げる I think.) Finally we took the ball back after for a while.("Finally" and "after a while" are a little redundant.) I thought the younger dog was difficult to manage, so I decided to make a space with themgive them space. (Or: "give them some space" "separate from them".  You could also say "make room for them" but that would imply that you were originally taking up all the space and when they came you had to make room for them or else they would not have had any space/room.)
We moved to the other playground that was placed next to the biggest playground whichwhere the family iswas playing with the dogs. As soon as we started to playing again, the younger dog also came running toward us again!("also" is usually "in addition to" like above where you talk about both of the dogs.  Plus, its redundant with "again") The mother yelled it(at it) 'NO!!' and took/led it to their place/to where they were, but it couldn't stop repeatingedly running toward us!("their place" "my place" "your place" usually implies home or apartment うち？） I was also terrified because as it tried to get athe ball, it and bit my elbow and my clothes! (I assume you mean like ながら here, so I added "as", and ", it".  Also, it's a specific ball, already introduced to the reader, so it's "the ball".)
I couldn't tolerate the owner to letting it be free anymore, and/(so I) asked her to put a leads/leash on it if she couldn't manage it.(Or: "to put it on a leash")
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Owners have to manage Their dog's behavior

I went to a playground with my dog today. There was a family that had two golden retrievers. The mother asked me a for permission to let my dog and their dogs them go and play without a leash, and I answered, 'Yes' because I wanted my dog to play with as same as theirs.
When we started to play with a ball, one of their dogs ran and chased our ball. The other dog one also followed the first one, so my dog was terrified of them and let the ball go. The younger one took the ball in its mouth, but it didn't want to give the ball even though to its owner. Finally we took the ball back after for a while. I thought the younger dog was difficult to manage, so I decided to make a space with them.   (More naturally I would say: 'so I decided to give them space or move away from them or separate myself from them)  
We moved to the other playground that was placed next to the biggest playground which where the family is was playing with the dogs. As soon as we started to playing again, the younger dog also came running toward us again! The mother yelled, it 'NO!!' and took it to their place ('their place' usually means 'their house'. More naturally I would say: 'and took it to where they were), but it couldn't stop repeatedly running toward us! I was also terrified because it tried to get a the ball and bit my elbow and my clothes!
I couldn't tolerate that the owner to let it allowed their dog be free anymore, and asked her to put a leash on it if she couldn't manage it. Her face changed to be became mad (Or angry), so I said additional words to her about it bitting me. (You can also say: 'so I also said that her dog bit me') To my surprise, she answered, 'just bit a your clothing, right?'. Oh, my goodness... how could she say this word?? 
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Her face changed to be madannoyance/anger, so I said additional words to her about it biting me.(Or: "so I (also) mentioned it biting me", "mentioned it bit me") To my surprise she answered 'just bit ayour clothing, right?'. Oh, my goodness... how could she say this word?? I was getting mad and also added 'it actually bit my elbow'. Finally she decided to go home....

After they leavingleft, we enjoyed playing at there, but I was still gloomy. I'm sure it will keep me up tonight.

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