A warm thing
Yesterday I went though a thing that really moved.
After a tired day I was going home and I found the bus had been start to set off, so I gave up chasing it. Suddenly, a woman run into the bus stop and waved hand so that the bus stopped and waited for her again. But surprisingly she didn't get on the bus and just looked at me and speak loudly, "hurry up", so I began to run and finally catch on the bus. When I turned my back and would like to say thanks for her, I just found out that she didn't want to on the bus and just stopped the bus for me. I suddenly felt warm and moved.
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A warm thing
Yesterday I went though a thing that really moved. Yesterday, something happened to me that really moved me.After a tired long day (a long day implies it was tiring) I was going on my way home and I found seen that the bus had been start to set off started to pull away., so I gave up chasing it.I thought it was too late and I had missed it. Suddenly, a woman run into the bus stop and waved her hand so that the bus stopped and waited for her again. But surprisingly she didn't get on the bus. and just She looked at me and speak loudly yelled, "hurry up". so I began to run and finally catch I got on the bus. When I turned my back and would like to say thanks for her to thank her, I just found out noticed that she didn't want to get on the bus. She had and just stopped the bus for me. I suddenly felt warm and moved.
The story was clear in meaning.. My suggestions are just to make it sound more natural in the English language.
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