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I Share Therefore I am. 我つながる、故に我あり。 To share. To connect. They are the words I heard the most in my recent decayed. They are beautiful words , I think, but let me ask you, do you ALWAYS have any stuffs to share? Why do you need to ALWAYS connect to someone all day? I saw an interesting phrase, "I share therefore I am." I think it means that you confirm you exist when you connect with someone. If you don't get any texts in all morning, you feel strange or worry about your phone being broken and feel it looks like the end of the world. If you don't see any "liking" in your face book, you might feel you don't have any friends and being isolated in the world. You always have to make sure you exist by sharing with others. "What a relief! I share today, therefore I am alive." The phrase, " I share therefore I am." is very clever. But I know you remember that it used to be "I think therefore I am." To think. That is the ability which only human beings have. I don't want to lose my ability of thinking. I'm thinking what this world is going to be, how people think and make a beautiful future for our children. Think and take action. No worries if you don't get any text just for 3 hours.

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I Share Therefore I am. 我つながる、故に我あり。

To share. To connect. Words that I hear often nowadays/ These are the words I heard the most nowadays.in my recent decayed. , I think they are beautiful words , but let me ask you, do you ALWAYS have **any stuffs to share something? Why do you need to ALWAYS be connected to someone all day?

I saw an interesting phrase, "I share therefore I am."
I think it means that you confirm you exist when you connect with someone. If you don't get any texts in all morning, you feel strange or worry about your phone being broken and feels it looks like the end of the world. If you don't see any "likesing" on your face book, you might feel like you don't have any friends  or/and that you are alone being isolated in the world. You always have to prove that you make sure you exist by sharing with others. "What a relief! I shared today, therefore I am alive."

The phrase, " I share therefore I am." is very clever.
But I know you remember that it used to be "I think therefore I am."
To think.
That is the ability which only human beings have. I don't want to lose my ability of thinking.
I'm thinking/I often think/  about what this world is going to be, how people will think and how will they make a beautiful future for our children.
Think and take action.
No worries if you don't get any text just for 3 hours.

**any stuffs <-stuffはもう単数形と複数形ので[ do you always have stuff to share」を書いたの方がいい
しかし!
この場合には stuffというのは物体をつたえるがFBで書くものは物体じゃないのでstuffを使わないほうがいいよ ^_^. そして文のorderのことを中心にきをつけるね

例文:
Do you always have to share something/stuff? <-この例文には stuffとか somethingは文の終わりについたので「have」の意味がちょっと変わる。 stuff・somethingは文の終わりについて、文の気分は
" Is it Necessary to share something all the time "のような感じになる。
その人にお金を上げるはずですか?
その人と挨拶してあげるはずですか?
mustのような感じ、たぶんはずより強いだよね?

Do you always have stuff to share?  <-しかし![stuff・something」は真ん中についたら、「have」の意味は「何かを持っている」のような感じになる。

これそうぞうしてね、ちずこは家持ってない人に会うと、い~つも、い~つもその人にお金を渡してあげるので他人はちずこに、「ちずこさんはいつも何かを渡すということがありますか?」っと聞く
それからちずこは「うっせい!」と言って、その人を顔に打つって、にげる



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I Share Therefore I am. 我つながる、故に我あり。

To share. To connect. They are the words I heard the most in mythe recent decadedecayed.("decayed" is 腐敗されました I think.  And it's usually not your personal "my" decade.) They are beautiful words , I think, but let me ask you, do you ALWAYS have any stuffsthings/stuff/something to share?(Or: "have something worth sharing?") Why do you need to ALWAYS connect to someone all day?

I saw an interesting phrase, "I share therefore I am."
I think it means that you confirm you exist when you connect with someone.(Or: "confirm your existence") If you don't get any texts (in) all morning, you feel strange or worry about your phone being broken and feel it looks like the end of the world.("in" is usually not used after "get any texts", "get" implies "in" but its okay. "feel it looks like" is a bit redundant, maybe "feel it's the end" or "and it looks like the end") If you don't see any "liking" in your facebook, you might feel you don't have any friends and that you are/like you are being isolated in the world.(I think its "likes" that you get on facebook, not "liking" but I don't really use Facebook.  Also "being isolated" either starts a phrase stating the consequences of being isolated, or it sounds like something active, i.e., that someone is actively trying to cut you off from others. For instance "One might feel themselves being isolated from the world if they spend too much time with computers.") You always have to make sure you exist by sharing with others. "What a relief! I shared/am sharing today, therefore I am alive."

The phrase, " I share therefore I am." is very clever.
But I know you remember that it used to be "I think therefore I am."
To think.
That is the ability which only human beings have. I don't want to lose my ability of thinking. ("the/my ability to think" is better.)
I'm thinking what this world is going to be, how people think and (how to) make a beautiful future for our children.
Think and take action.
No worries if you don't get any text just for 3 hours. (More natural "get any texts for just three hours")
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@Lupin, That's what exactly I'm thinking. How to speak. That's a question.
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What would I call this kinda society? I don't know what I would call this society itself, but I would say it's almost a reflex of technology. It seems that the more simple technology makes our life, we have to pay for it in some unexpected way. When people were farmers, they probably ate together more and maybe the environment was cleaner. Then we had the industrial revolution and people worked in the fields less, and in the factories more but it was easier to get food and other things. So families spent less time together, and maybe the environment started to get polluted. Now we have the digital revolution, where you can get everything super fast, talk to anyone from anywhere. But now people don't talk to other people as often, rarely leave the house, and many other things. I've actually found that sometimes people don't know HOW to talk to other people. I often wonder what the next revolution will bring.
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@Christy, I think people who don't have their confidence often want to show off how much happy they are. It's ironic, isn't it? So you don't have to think the others are more colorful than you. Thank you for your comment. You must be a nice lady.

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