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I have learned been learning English since I was 13 years old , when I was in Junior Grade one . That was my first time to learn when I first learned my ABCs. I liked English from then on. Time goes by quickly. 17 yrs passed , and I choose chose my a job in which I can use English everyday. 
It seems that since I have been learning English for 17 yrs, I should be very a master of it , but I was very shy when I was at school or university. I dared not speak out, so I think I just learned English in my heart. I have nobody to talk with. Fortunately , my spoken speaking is not very bad , but I still feel a little nervous when I talk to someone people now.
I’m doing a sales job now, so I need to communicate with my all kinds of customers everyday . I found I can discuss with them everything with them according to the regarding work issues, but I don’t know how to start with the daily oral communication.
I do hope someone can help me with this. Of course , I will keep on learning everyday!

Essay

I have learned English since 13 years old , when I was in Junior Grade one . That was my first time to learn the ABC . I liked English from then on . Time goes by quickly and 17 yrs have passed and I chose a job where I can use English everyday.
It seems as if I have learning English for 17 yrs then I should be a master of it , but I was very shy when I was at school or university. I dared not speak out , so i think i just learnt English in my mind and I had nobody to talk with . Fortunately , my speaking is not very bad , but i still feel a little nervous when i talk to someone now.
I’m doing a sales job now, and i need to communicate with my all kinds of customers everyday . I found i can discuss with them everything relating to the work , but I don’t know how to talk about daily things.
I do hope someone can help me with this , of course and i will keep on learning everyday !

Very well written!

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I have learned English since 13 years old I have been learning English since I was 13 years old, I when I was in Junior Grade one . That was my first time to learn ABC That was the first time I learnt ABC's. I like English from then on I liked English from then on . Time goes by so quickly , 17 yrs have passed , I choose my job , which i can use English everyday I will choose a job where I can use English everyday ;
Seems i have learning English 17 yrs, It seems that I have been learning English for 17 years I should be very master of it I should be a master at it , but I was very shy when I was at school and university , I dared not speak out , so i think i just learnt English in my heart , i have nobody to talk with . Fortunately , my spoken is not very bad , but i still feel a little nervous when i talk to someone now ;
I’m doing a sales job now, i need to communicate with all kinds of customers everyday . I found i can discuss with them everything according to the work issue  I found that I can discuss with them anything according to the job, but don’t know how to start with the daily oral communication.
I do hope someone can help me with this , of course , i will keep on learning everyday !

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