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Taichi Everybody saw what I wear clothes, yes, I want to show is tai chi. Tai chi originated from ancient China. No matter you are young or aged,male or famale,no matter strong or weak,slim or plump,you all can choose Taijiquan as your ideal exercises. Tai chi--the world of Yin and Yang, the world of nature and relaxation. When practicing it quietly and slowly, you can sense the existing of air and fully enjoyment, meanwhile ,you can also feel all the movements like the waves. Taijiquan is the treasure of Chinese traditional culture, I wish there are more and more people around the world to learn taijichuan .In the field of culture, the world is a global village.

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Taichi

Everybody sees that I wear unusual clothes. Yes, I want to show you tai chi. Tai chi originates from ancient China. No matter you are young or old, male or famale, strong or weak,slim or plump,you can learn Taijiquan as your ideal exercises.
Tai chi--the world of Yin and Yang, the world of nature and relaxation. When practicing it quietly and slowly, you can sense the existence of air. You can also feel the movements of your body like the waves. Taijiquan is the treasure of Chinese traditional culture and I hope there are more and more people around the world to learn taijichuan. When it comes to culture, the world is a global village.

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Tai Chi

Everybody saw what I wear clothes I was wearing. Yes, I wanted to show is everyone Tai Chi (also known by its full name: Taijiquan).

Tai Chi originated from in ancient China. No matter you are young or aged,male or famale,no matter strong or weak,slim or plump, Regardless of age, gender, strength, or size, you all (<--文章里最好不要写通用的 "you"。) everyone can choose Taijiquan as your his/her ideal exercises.

Tai Chi centers on the world of Yin and Yang, the world of nature and relaxation. When practicing it quietly and slowly, you we can sense the existence of energy in the air and fully enjoyment it; meanwhile, you we can also feel all the movements like the waves. Taijiquan is the treasure of Chinese traditional culture, and I wish there are more and more people around the world to would learn taijichuan it. In the field of culture, the world is a global village.

写得不错,Amy。请注意英文的标点符号规则:逗号和句号后面有空格。

有问题请别怕问 =)

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