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I want to study the Chinese Economy and investigate Chinese marketing to consider the potential business cooperation between China and Japan, specifically the business environment of Shanghai and Hongkong, since China is generally becoming the most important market in the world now.
For Shanghai, I am very willing to study at Fudan university to focus my investigation on Pudong industrial area in order to understand why it plays such an important role of the growth of Chinese economy.
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Please revise this memo^^
I want to studyFor Shanghai, I am very willing to study at Fudan University to focus my investigation on the Pudong industrial area in order to understand why it plays such an important role
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完璧です！Just a few issues with prepositions and articles.
@ study Chinese Economy vs growth of the Chinese economy
1st case: Chinese Economy is a topic... no need for the .. example: I study English, Mathematics and Chinese Economy.
2nd case: Chinese economy is an economy that is Chinese (adj) ... we need the to reference the object ... example: The growth of the population and the economy of China fascinate me.
完璧です！Just a few issues with prepositions and articles.
@ study Chinese Economy vs growth of the Chinese economy
1st case: Chinese Economy is a topic... no need for the .. example: I study English, Mathematics and Chinese Economy.
2nd case: Chinese economy is an economy that is Chinese (adj) ... we need the to reference the object ... example: The growth of the population and the economy of China fascinate me.
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