would you correct this :D ?
On the other side of the globe there are so many people, who are starving everyday. The country, which they have lived, is totally destroyed and they cannot find some food anymore. Even worse, two third of them are children and infants. More they go through a war, they becoming weakener than before. Most of them have severe disease, anyone can't compromise tomorrow's life. The infant mortality rate is the already highest in developed country, which goes through a war. They need someone's help. Not only children, but also painful adult. It's not their fault, that the war broke out. We should help them with humanity.
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would you correct this :D ?
On the other side of the globe there are so many people who are starving every day. The countries in which they live are totally destroyed and they cannot find food. Even worse, two-thirds of them are children and infants. The more they go through war, the weaker they become. Most of them have severe disease. The infant mortality rate is already the highest of any developed country that has gone through war. They need help: not only children, but also adults are in pain. It's not their fault that the war broke out. We should help them, in the name of humanity.1
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Oh, I know, but I didn't know how can I change the section.
I'll try to change it again and upload in English section from next time.
Thank you for your advise, Leo :D!
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Hey Sohyung Kim,
this is at the moment in the section for German, maybe you want to change that :)
Greetings,
Leo
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