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My dream house My dream is to live in a simple house surrounded by a big garden full of flowers and trees. I don't like to live in an apartment in the city because there is so noisy, especially at night. My dream house should be located outside the city. It has a lake nearby. Every day, I will refresh by the breeze coming the trees and feel so good. I choose to have a lake nearly because it's better to go natural than swimming pool that would make my dream house cost a lot. Also, I can go fishing on the lake if I feel bored. My dream house will have a short gate because it is suitable for my house. Behind my house, there will be a large yard for me to plant flowers. There will also be a wide place in the backyard where I will have a picnic. My dream house will be made out of wood. It will have two floors. On the first floor, there will be a living room, there will be a big soft sofa for me and my parents talk together. There will be also an automatic fan be abe to automatic temperature control in the room. The dinning room and the kitchen will have an automatic dishwasher and a automatic washing machine. There will be a robot that can cook meals for my family. On the second floor, it will have a bedroom and a bathroom. My bathroom will have a hi-tech sink and a modern bath. In my bedroom there will have a conditioner, a super smart TV to watch programs from other planets and an automatic lamp can light off when I go out.

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My dream house

My dream is to live in a simple house surrounded by a big garden full of flowers and trees. I don't like living in an apartment in the city, because it is so noisy, especially at night. My dream house should be located outside the city.
It has a lake nearby. Every day, I will be refreshed by the breeze coming through the trees and feel so good. I choose to have a lake nearby because it's better to go natural than to have a swimming pool that would make my dream house cost a lot. Also, I can go fishing on the lake if I feel bored. My dream house will have a short gate because that will be sufficient. Behind my house, there will be a large yard for me to plant flowers. There will also be a wide place in the backyard where I can have picnics. My dream house will be made out of wood.
It will have two floors. On the first floor, there will be a living room and a big, soft sofa where my parents and I can talk together. There will be also an automatic fan be able to control temperature in the room. The dinning room and the kitchen will have an automatic dishwasher and an automatic washing machine. There will be a robot that can cook meals for my family. On the second floor, it will have a bedroom and a bathroom. My bathroom will have a hi-tech sink and a modern bath. In my bedroom there will be an air conditioner, a super smart TV to watch programs from other planets and an automatic lamp that will turn off when I go out.


Sounds really natural.  Good job.

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