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Could you help me revise these setences? 1 Hey, please do not cut in our line! 2 Could please wash your dishes after your finish your meal, because if you put your all stuff in the basin , the next one would be feel uncomfortable. 3 You can use my hangers to hang up your clothes. 4 You could put two pieces of toast into bread toaster , which will make your bread much crippier. 5 Although staying up is a bad habit, but lots of people still have to do that , because they are struggling for their working and studying

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"Could you please wash your dishes after you finish your meal, because if you just put your dishes in the basin, the next person will be inconvenienced."
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Could you help me revise these setences? <-----Sentences

1 Hey, please do not cut in our line!

(Hey! Please don't cut into our line!)

2 Could please wash your dishes after your finish your meal, because if you put your all stuff in the basin , the next one would be feel uncomfortable.

(Could you please wash your dishes after you finish your meal because if you put all your stuff in the sink the next one won't fit.) I made this sentence grammatically correct but it still doesn't make sense. What do you mean by it?

3 You can use my hangers to hang up your clothes.

This is OK.

4 You could put two pieces of toast into bread toaster , which will make your bread much crippier.

(You could put two pieces of toast into the toaster and that will make your bread a lot more crispier.) 

5 Although staying up is a bad habit, but lots of people still have to do that , because they are struggling for their working and studying

(Although staying up is a bad habit a lot of people still do it because they are struggling with their work and studies.) 

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Could you help me revise these setences?

1 Hey, please do not cut in our line! cut in line/cut our line/ or just Hey, no cutting! if they are very rude
2 Could please wash your dishes after your finish your meal, because if you put your all stuff in the basin , the next one would be feel uncomfortable.Could you please || meal. || If you leave all your dirty dishes in || next person would feel
3 You can use my hangers to hang up your clothes.
4 You could put two pieces of toast into bread toaster , which will make your bread much crippier. into the toaster. || It will || crispier.
5 Although staying up is a bad habit, but lots of people still have to do that , because they are struggling for their working and studying habit, lots || do it because || with working or studying.

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