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Today, I wake up a bit late, but I managed to go to class in time. However, the class ended up to be cancelled because a teacher was not feeling well and was at a medical center. So, I prepared for next class until it started. During the class, I was so sleepy and even numbed from sleepiness. So, my brain didn't work and I couldn't speak English well.
At night, I talked with my boyfriend on the phone. These days, I really depressed and frustrated by thinking how poor my English is, but talking with him relieved my uneasy. It was not that he gave me a proper advice, but just talking with him made me feel that I don't have to be so negative and depressed. He is special for me and the one I really want to treasure forever:)
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I'd like you to correct my diary.
Today, I woke up a bit late, but I managed to get to class in time. However, the class ended up getting cancelled because the teacher was not feeling well and was at a medical center. So, I prepared for my next class until it started. During the class, I was so sleepy and even numbed became numb from sleepiness. So, my It felt like my brain didn't work and I couldn't speak English well.At night, I talked with my boyfriend on the phone. These days, I feel really depressed and frustrated by thinking about how poor my English is, but talking with him relieved my uneasy feelings. It was not that he gave me a proper advice, but just talking with him made me feel that I don't have to be so negative and depressed. He is special for me and the one I really want to treasure forever. :)
Fantastic work! You write very well.
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling a little depressed about your English ability, but please be assured that your English is very good! I'm glad to hear that you have a lovely boyfriend who helps you feel at ease.
Keep up the great work! :)
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I'd like you to correct my diary
Today, I woke up a bit late, but I managed to go to class in time. However, the class ended up being cancelled because the teacher was not feeling well and was at a medical center. So, I prepared for next class until it started. During the class, I was so sleepy and even numbed from sleepiness. So, my brain didn't work and I couldn't speak English well.At night, I talked with my boyfriend on the phone. These days, I really am depressed and frustrated by thinking how poor my English is, but talking with him relieved my uneasness. It was not that he gave me a proper advice, but just talking with him made me feel that I don't have to be so negative and depressed. He is special for me and is the one that I really want to treasure forever:)
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Today, I woke up a bit late, but I managed to get to class in time. However, the class ended up to be cancelled because a teacher was not feeling well and was at a medical center. So, I prepared for next class until it started. During the class, I was so sleepy and even numbed from sleepiness. So, my brain didn't work and I couldn't speak English well.
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