When someone dies young
When I was younger and still in the college, I had a good friend called Ron. We first met in high school and turned to be good friends for a few years, because he died when he was just 19 years old due to some terminal disease.
It happened 20 years ago (I'm 40 year old now), and I was never told what health condition he had. I believe he had cancer, and maybe her mother never told me because she not wanted him to know that. Or maybe doctors couldn't detect that 20 years ago, who knows.
Some days ago, I was organizing some papers here and I found a story he wrote. He always liked to write stories, and believe me, those stories were really good. I read them again some days ago and I can say that I got impressed how good he could write.
So maybe the world lost the opportunity to meet a good writer. He could have had a brilliant future. So sad.
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So sad, indeed. Keep on writing. :)
When someone dies young
When I was younger and still in college, I had a good friend named Ron. We first met in high school and turned to be good friends for a few years. Then, he died when he was just 19 years old due to some terminal disease.
It happened 20 years ago (I'm 40 year old now), and I was never told what health condition he had. I believe he had cancer, and maybe her mother never told me because she did not want him to know about his condition too. Or maybe the doctors couldn't detect the illness 20 years ago. Who knows?
Some days ago, I was organizing some papers here and I found a story he wrote. He always liked to write stories, and believe me, those stories were really good. I read them again some days ago and I can say that I got impressed at how good he could write.
Perhaps the world lost the opportunity to meet a good writer. He could have had a brilliant future. So sad.
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When someone dies young
When I was younger and still in college, I had a good friend called Ron. We first met in high school and became good friends. A few years later, he died when he was just 19 years old due to a terminal disease.This happened 20 years ago (I'm 40 years old now), and I was never told what health condition he had. I believe he had cancer, and maybe his mother never told me because she didn't want him to know. Or maybe doctors couldn't detect that 20 years ago, who knows.
A few days ago, I was organizing some papers here and I found a story he wrote. He always liked to write stories, and believe me, those stories were really good. I read them again some days ago and I can say that I was impressed by how well he could write.
So maybe the world lost a good writer. He could have had a brilliant future. So sad.
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