My family

Hello everybody.
My name is Tung. I am 26 years old. Today I will talk about my family. My family has 4 people better: "4 members": My father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is 54 years old, is and working in my house/ at home. My father is very hot(this means attractive. Is that really what you want to say?, if not, say:  strict) person. When I was small(this means your hight) little (this means your age), he sometimes hit me so I hated (because later you say that you now don't hate him anymore. So you have to use the past) my father. But when I grow grew up I realized all that this iswas verry (only 1 "r")  good for me. (I realized that his way of educating me was very good for me)

My mother is 51 yeas old, she (your mom is a woman --> "she")  is works in the factory of China ("C" not "c"). My mother is very very beatiful (only 1 "l")  and very virtuous. (better: My mother is really beautiful/ my mother is very very pretty. Because "beautiful" means "very pretty", so you cannot say "very beautiful", it sounds strange and expresses a double meaning) 
My sister is two years older than me. My sister was(if she is still married, you have to say "is", you have to use the present tense) married, her family is very happy and they have/ she has 2 children.
Thanks for reading.