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Choosing to study at colleges and university in foreign countries Studying abroad is a great chance for everybody. It not only brings enjoyable, but also challenges to themselves. From my view point, choosing to study at colleges and university in foreign countries will give us more benefits than drawbacks. You will be hardly to adopt with a new environment. You must build a dependent life without your parents, friends and familiar things. Not every student can be concentrate on studying when they leaves abroad. Feeling loneliness and homesickness is very awful. You make a decision yourself in difficult situation or face up with strange people in a new country. Whether can we be brave enough to get over everything? Difficulty in communicating with people is second drawbacks. In during time studying abroad, communication is one of major tool for student access culture, friend, teacher . If you do not enough knowledge about language, sometimes you will be able to understand which lectures speak. It lead to depression, boring when not controlling lesson. On other hand, the opportunity is bigger aspect than disadvantages. The firstly strength is developing independent lifestyle. When a student is educated in their hometown, they will not be chance to understand how to live independent. Therefore, they depended on their parents who have responsibility to take care of them and they felt that this is very normal. Studying a university in foreign countries will help you more mature, own your lives. Moreover, approaching with the higher education standard and the advanced equipment environment is better a jobs. When you are going to come back hometown, company and concern are willing to get you into vital position and to fit your quality. And, it is your basic platform to enter the life, you will be more confident about yourself. Last but not least, making friend with lots of people who come from different countries. We will learn new and unique things from them such as: culture, language, lifestyles. I believe that it is very great in strange environment. They are person who we can share sadness, happiness when living far from hometown and understand your emotion without relatives, friends, parents. And sometimes, they also contribute and give us some interesting idea. In conclusion, studying in a foreign university will receive more useful thing than drawbacks. Therefore, it is good orientation for life which help you escaping out of poverty in future

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Choosing to study at colleges and university in foreign countries

Studying abroad is a great chance for everybody. It not only brings enjoyable, but also challenges to themselves. From my viewpoint, choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries will give us more benefits than drawbacks.
You will be hardly to adopt with a new environment. You must build a dependent life without your parents, friends, and familiar things. Not every student can be concentrate on studying when they leaves abroad. Feeling loneliness and homesickness is very awful. You make a decision yourself in difficult situations or face up with strange people in a new country. Whether can we be brave enough to get over everything or not? Difficulty in communicating with people is second drawbacks. In during time studying abroad, communication is one of major tools for student access culture, friend, teacher . If you do not have enough knowledge about language, sometimes you will be able to understand which lectures speak. It leads to  depression, boring when not controlling lesson.
On other hand, the opportunity is bigger aspect than disadvantages. The firstly strength is developing independent lifestyle. When a student is educated in their hometown, they will not be chance to understand how to live independently. Therefore, they have depended on their parents who have responsibility to take care of them and they felt that this is very normal. Studying a university in foreign countries will help you more mature, own your lives. Moreover, approaching with the higher education standard and the advanced equipment environment is better a job. When you are going to come back hometown, company and concern are willing to get you into vital position and to fit your quality. And, it is your basic platform to enter the life, you will be more confident about yourself. Last but not least, making friend with lots of people those who come from different countries. We will learn new and unique things from them, such asculture, language, lifestyles. I believe that it is very great in strange environment. They are person people who we can share sadness, happiness when living far from hometown and understand your emotion without relatives, friends, parents. And sometimes, they also contribute and give us some interesting ideas.
In conclusion, studying in a foreign university will receive more useful things than drawbacks. Therefore, it is a good orientation for life which helps you escaping out of poverty in future.

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