Education which parents in Japan and the U.S.A. hope their children will complete
The Charts are about foresight of education of children between Japan and U.S.A.
Firstly the big issue is they want to promote graduated 4-year university ninety percent of people in Japan. In U.S.A, however, they want to do only fifty percent.
Secondly, it is exactly few as compare with numbers of graduate school between both sides. On the other hand, people of forty-three percent on average hope to graduate school in U.S.A. Then it roughly levels out BOY and GIRL in U.S.A.but differ in percentage BOY and GIRL in Japan.
Finally, it compares with the sexes separated, it has a tendency toward seeing gender in Japan. People of around seventy percent want to hope to graduate school for BOY, however, for GIRL, people of fifty percent hope education of school and college / vocational school and around forty percent education of 4-year university.
Whereas, there is almost no change between gender in U.S.A. It shows an excess of gender.
To sum up, almost of Japanese hope to more higher level education by children.
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On the other hand, people of forty-three percent of people on average hope to graduate school in U.S.A. (I'm sure that "of" is the opposite of Japanese) Then it roughly levels out for BOYs and GIRLs in the U.S.A.but differs in percentage for BOYs and GIRLs in Japan.
Finally, it comparescomparing with the sexes separated, it has a tendency toward seeingthere is a gender difference/discrepancy in Japan.(You don't need to say "separated" if you are "comparing", obviously they're separated, how else would you compare?) People of around seventy percent of people want to hope totheir children graduate school for BOYs, however, for GIRLs, people of fifty percent of people hope for an education of school and college / vocational school and around forty percent hope for an education of/at a 4-year university.
Whereas, there is almost no change/difference between gender in the U.S.A. ("difference" is better than "change", "change" is more like transformation like 変わる versus 相違)It shows an excess of gender. (This isn't right, it means either too many people of one gender exist or too many genders exist. Not about the percentages. "excess" is the wrong word particularly. )
To sum up, almost all of Japanese hope to morefor a higher/high level education byfor their/to be achieved by their children. (This is not a good summation. "higher" as opposed to what? "higher" than what? It looks like there's several differences in the charts, male and female 4 year college expectations is the major one, but it seems like graduate school isn't even on the Japan chart ? You could say more Japanese hope their children go to a 4 year college than Americans, but that's not the only difference and it doesn't include)
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If you have adviseesce andor suitable phrases and words, please let me know!
Thank you.
Finally, it comparescomparing with the sexes separated, it has a tendency toward seeingthere is a gender difference/discrepancy in Japan.(You don't need to say "separated" if you are "comparing", obviously they're separated, how else would you compare?) People of around seventy percent of people want to hope totheir children graduate school for BOYs, however, for GIRLs, people of fifty percent of people hope for an education of school and college / vocational school and around forty percent hope for an education of/at a 4-year university.
Whereas, there is almost no change/difference between gender in the U.S.A. ("difference" is better than "change", "change" is more like transformation like 変わる versus 相違)It shows an excess of gender. (This isn't right, it means either too many people of one gender exist or too many genders exist. Not about the percentages. "excess" is the wrong word particularly. )
To sum up, almost all of Japanese hope to morefor a higher/high level education byfor their/to be achieved by their children. (This is not a good summation. "higher" as opposed to what? "higher" than what? It looks like there's several differences in the charts, male and female 4 year college expectations is the major one, but it seems like graduate school isn't even on the Japan chart ? You could say more Japanese hope their children go to a 4 year college than Americans, but that's not the only difference and it doesn't include)
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If you have adviseesce andor suitable phrases and words, please let me know!
Thank you.
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表はいつも難しいです
Education which parents in Japan and the U.S.A. hope their children will complete (The chart says "highest level of education which parents.." Your title here is okay, but "Education which" is slightly awkward because it doesn't have the longer more specific phrase before "which" You could say better "The education that parents... hope their children will complete" or better "The level of education")
Firstly the big issue is theythe proportion (of people) that want their children to promote graduated from a 4-year university is ninety percent of people in Japan. In U.S.A, however, they want to doit's only fifty percent. (Except its not, it looks like its 65 and 39 and 41 and 45 in the chart)
Secondly, it is exactly few as compare with the same numbers offor graduate school between both sides.("exactly few" is not a phrase you can use. If you want to say that there are the same low number of people, then "it is the same low percentage for graduate school hopes for either side." Because percentages are not numbers here, you have to use "for". So for instance you're not talking about the actual numbers of people in millions of people, so you can't say "the same number of" but numbers "for" is like data for, data supporting.)
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YIP. YOu need specific questions. Tokutei no shitsumon ga hitsuyōdesu... ateru?
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I don't think anyone want's to do your English homework for you.
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