Introduction 1.
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I’m Eszter, and I have just finished my degree in Energetic Engineering at Budapest University of Technology and Economics. However, I was attracted by drama and theatre since high school. The most significant experience of my life was when I wrote and directed a play which was also performed at the Madách Theatre. Where am I now? I formed an own acting company, and our first performance will be shown at the end of May. My other passion is hitchhiking, that came into my life when I was around 20 years old. My first hitchhiking experience led to Italy, to Lake Garda, then to Verona and Opatia. After that, for two years I hitchhiked abroad for a month every summer, to places like Barcelona, Montpellier and Switzerland.
Tomi came up with the idea of the "LadaTour" and I was very happy when he asked me if I would like to be one of his fellow-passengers. We have already wanted to make a Balcan trip like this for many years. If we will be there, I’d like to jump from the Mostar Bridge and swim in the Plitvice Lakes. I do love hanging around and explore new places.
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Introduction 1.
Hi!I’m Eszter, and I have just finished my degree in energetic engineering (<--With the exception of language names, which are always capitalized, names of subjects are not capitalized unless they're used as titles.) at the Budapest University of Technology and Economics. However, I was have been attracted by drama and theatre since (<--Because you have "since," the action is ongoing; thus, you must use the present perfect form "have been.") high school. The most significant experience of my life was when I wrote and directed a play, which was also performed at the Madách Theatre. Where am I now? I have formed an my own acting company, and our first performance will be shown at the end of May.
My other passion is hitchhiking, that which came into my life when I was around 20 twenty-years-old. (<--It's best to write all numbers less than 100 as words.) My first hitchhiking experience led me to Italy: to Lake Garda, then to Verona, and finally Opatia. After that, for two years, I hitchhiked abroad for a month every summer, traveling to places like Barcelona, Montpelier, (<--Although the Oxford comma is optional, I always recommend using it in case there is any confusion.) and Switzerland.
Tomi (<--Make sure you mention who Tomi is.) came up with the idea of the "LadaTour," and I was very happy when he asked me if I would like to be one of his fellow passengers. We have already wanted to make take a Balkan trip like this for many years. If we will be get there, I’d like to jump from the Mostar Bridge and swim in the Plitvice Lakes. I do love hanging around and exploring new places.
Very nicely written, Eszter! You have a great grasp of English. I hope my corrections and notes are helpful for you. Please let me know if you have any questions =)
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