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3/19 English Diary "START" Hello everyone. My name is mochi. I'm a high school student in Hokkaido, Japan. I am starting to write my diary in English everyday. Because I want to grow my English skill and meet a lot of people around the world. Today, I went to church to participate a worship. I played UNO with primary schoolchildren in church. Next, I went to Sapporo Station(a city town) to look note PC. I want to have a new PC. I had looked around for 4 hours on foot. I have felt tired because I walked too much..lol おやすみなさい〜 have a good night;) P.S this photo is taken with church members. This cherry blossom is camera effect;) -I want to know this expression in English- ・歩きすぎて足が壊れそうだ --Memo- around the world:世界中の participate/v/:参加する primary schoolchildren/n/:小学生 a city town/n/:都会 look around:見て回る　さが on foot:徒歩で

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3/19 English Diary "START"

Hello everyone.
My name is mochi. I'm a high school student in Hokkaido, Japan.
I am starting to write my diary in English everyday. (Because you are just starting to write it, and have not been writing it already, "write a diary" sound a little better.  After you start writing it, then its your, "my diary".)
Because I want to growimprove my English skill and meet a lot of people around the world. ("grow" is used with plants and animals, and sometimes businesses)

Today, I went to church to participate ain worship.
I played UNO with primary schoolchildren in church.
Next, I went to Sapporo Station(a city town) to look for a notebook PC. (Or: "to look at notebook PCs", "laptops")
I want to have a new PC.
I had looked around for 4 hours on foot.
I have felt tired because I walked too much..lol

・歩きすぎて足が壊れそうだ

Sounds like "I walked so much it and it felt like my foot was broken.", "I walked so much it felt like my foot was broken." "I walked so much that it felt like my foot was broken." "Walking so much made my feet feel broken." I think? "Walking so much made my feet hurt" but that's 痛い

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