（编辑.........2.....）Once there was a lost princess.
Once there was a lost princess.
从前有一个迷路的公主。
An octopus saw the princess‘ hair that had tumbled into the sea and mistook it for another octopus.
一只章鱼看到公主垂落在在海里的长发，误以为是另一只章鱼。
And it fell in love.
便和公主的头发堕入了爱河。
When it found out it was actually Princess hair, the octopus offered to help the Princess return home.
当发现那实际上是公主的头发时，章鱼就主动帮助公主回家。
The Princess gave the octopus her hair as a thank you gift, to keep it company in the empty sea.
作为感谢，公主将她的头发拽掉送给了章鱼，让自己的头发在空旷的大海中陪伴它
And for a long time, the octopus felt like it had company, carrying around the Princess hair.
很长一段时间里，章鱼都随身带着公主的头发，感觉那些长发像是公主陪好伴着它。
When the currents untied the Princess‘ bundled hair, the octopus tried to gather the strands together, not realizing he had tied himself into knots.
当水流把捆绑着的公主的头发解开了，章鱼试图把散开的头发集结在一起，但是没有意识到他已把自己绑在一起了。
Each piece of the torn octopus‘ body was met with a strand of hair and came back to life.
每一块被撕裂的章鱼身体都遇到了一缕头发，然后就复活了。
This is where my mum says jellyfish come from.
这就是我妈妈说的水母的来由。
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（编辑.........2.....）Once there was a lost princess.
Once there was a lost princess.从前有一个迷路的公主。
An octopus saw the princess‘ hair that had tumbled into the sea and mistook it for another octopus.
一只章鱼看到公主垂落在在海里的长发，误以为是另一只章鱼。
And it fell in love.
便和公主的头发堕入了爱河。
When it found out it was actually Princess hair, the octopus offered to help the Princess return home.
当发现那实际上是公主的头发时，章鱼就主动帮助公主回家。
The Princess gave the octopus her hair as a thank you gift, to keep it company in the empty sea.
作为感谢，公主将她的头发拽掉送给了章鱼，让自己的头发在空旷的大海中陪伴它
And for a long time, the octopus felt like it had company, carrying around the Princess hair.
很长一段时间里，章鱼都随身带着公主的头发，感觉那些长发就像是公主正陪好伴着它。
When the currents untied the Princess‘ bundled hair, the octopus tried to gather the strands together, not realizing he had tied himself into knots.
当水流把束在一起的捆绑着的公主的长头发解开了，章鱼便试图把散开的头发集结在一起，但是没有意识到他已把自己绑成了一个一个的结在一起了。
Each piece of the torn octopus‘ body was met with a strand of hair and came back to life.
每一块被撕裂的章鱼身体都遇到了一缕头发，然后就复活了。
This is where my mum says jellyfish come from.
这就是我妈妈说的水母的来由。
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（编辑.........2.....）Once there was a lost princess.
Once there was a lost princess.从前有一个迷路的公主。
An octopus saw the princess‘ hair that had tumbled into the sea and mistook it for another octopus.
一只章鱼看到公主垂落在在海里的长发，误以为是另一只章鱼。
And it fell in love.
便和公主的头发堕入了爱河。
When it found out it was actually Princess hair, the octopus offered to help the Princess return home.
当发现那实际上是公主的头发时，章鱼就主动帮助公主回家。
The Princess gave the octopus her hair as a thank you gift, to keep it company in the empty sea.
作为感谢，公主将【把自己的一些头发】送给了章鱼，让自己的头发在空旷的大海中陪伴它
And for a long time, the octopus felt like it had company, carrying around the Princess hair.
很长一段时间里，章鱼都随身带着公主的头发，感觉那些长发像是公主陪伴着它。
When the currents untied the Princess‘ bundled hair, the octopus tried to gather the strands together, not realizing he had tied himself into knots.
当水流把【公主打成结的头发】解开了，章鱼试图把散开的头发【收拢/聚集】在一起，但是没有意识到他已把自己绑在一起了。
Each piece of the torn octopus‘ body was met with a strand of hair and came back to life.
每一块被撕裂的章鱼身体都遇到了一缕头发，然后就复活了。
This is where my mum says jellyfish come from.
这就是我妈妈说的水母的由来。
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It's funny.
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最后的“来由”改成”由来“会更好
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你的中文贼拉好。
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