Introductions for study on advertising sales models of Oppo Oppo is a company manufacturing mobile phones with a seat in the phones market in China. At the beginning, either its popularity or the quan

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Introductions for study on advertising sales models of Oppo Oppo is a company manufacturing mobile phones with a seat in the phones market in China. At the beginning, either its popularity or the quantity of mobile phones couldn’t make it stick out from the nationwide market then. However, with Tony Chen’s leadership, Oppo has become one of the top three ranking brand companies in consumer phone sales over several years. What caused the company's good fortune? To figure out the reasons for the rapid development of mobile phones of Oppo, we specifically searched on the Internet for why they captured the Chinese market successfully. As the data shows, a fierce offensive in advertising is one of the significant reasons. In first-tier and second-tier cities, even the third and fourth-tier ones ,there are almost billboards of Oppo on streets everywhere. Apart from this, TV ads and web popups of hot sale ones can be seen here and there. From the advert ”five-minute charging for two-hour talk time” to “More clear at this moment” ,it is obvious that it found its way ever deeper into people’s hearts .In this passage, starting with the sales model of its advertisements, we can research how it succeeded in domestic mobile phone market sales as one of the top three.

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Introductions for to a study on advertising sales models of Oppo

Oppo is a company manufacturing mobile phones with a seat in the phones market in China. At the beginning, neither its popularity nor the quantity of mobile phones couldn’t make it stick out from the nationwide market then.("At the beginning" or "In the beginning", but you don't need "then" at the end, its redundant. Could also say "neither their popularity nor their national market share stood out." "market share" as their share of the mobile phone market.) However, with Tony Chen’s leadership,
Oppo has become one of the top three ranking brand companies in consumer phone sales over several years.("top three" implies ranking. "brand" and "company" are redundant. "A good brand" "a good company", not "brand company". "company brand" is a company's brand" "over several years" is not clear. If they've been top three for several years, then "for several years". On the other hand, if it was Tony Chen's leadership over several years, then that's where "over several years" belongs, at the beginning.) What caused the company's good fortune? To figure out the reasons for the rapid development of the mobile phones of Oppo, we specifically searched on the Internet for why they captured the Chinese market successfully. As the data shows, a fierce offensive in advertising is one of the (most) significant reasons.
In first-tier and second-tier cities, and even in the third and fourth-tier ones ,there are almost billboards of Oppo on streets almost everywhere. Apart from this, TV ads and web popups of hot sales ones can be seen here and there. ("ones" doesn't make sense. "hot sale items" or "hot sales"?)From the advert(rarely used, either "ad" or "advertisement") ”five-minute charging for two-hour talk time” to “More clear at this moment” ,it is obvious that Oppo mobile phones it found its way ever deeper into people’s hearts .In this passage, starting with the sales model of its advertisements, we can research how it succeeded in domestic mobile phone market sales as one of the top three. (This last sentence should probably be, if its about something that follows later rather than this passage that you wrote here: "In the following passage, starting with the sales model of its advertisements/advertising, we will present our research about how Oppo succeeded in the domestic mobile phone market as one of the top three." "market sales", obviously they're sales, succeeded in "domestic mobile phone sales" or "domestic mobile phone market". "research" is not something you do while writing, the writing is about the research already done.)

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