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What is Ivanka feminism? Recently I've been work with some investment banker. One of the coworker told me that his department (IBD) only have men employee, no women employee, none at all. One of the reason is that the manager think that women couldn't endure heavy workload and another reason is some of the women resign when they have children. I think what you think is I am going to say that women should have equal rights. I am sorry to disappointing you, this is not my point today. I would like to express my view of female workers from my childhood memory. When I was a child, my mom is smart, sharp, and good looking business woman, she always at work, so every-time I finished school, my chauffeur come and took me back to mom's office or grandma house, I always refuse to go back to our house because only the Indonesian nanny with me. Most of the time, I do my schoolwork and afternoon nap at different and noisy places, my lunch is tasteless working meal. I stay at mom's office or grandma house until 9.30pm, and everytime we go back home and sleep very late. Home is place that for sleep at night only. When I was 12, mom sent me to a boarding school, I think one of the reason is she don't have time to be with me and give me a lot of guidance, so boarding school is a good choice, you pay the fee, everything about educate a child can be settle. I still remember that when I was still a kid, every night when we go back to our house, I ask my mom in the car"mummy, can you please don't go to work tomorrow, we stay at home, I don't want to go any place, just want to be with you and stay at home , and you cook a meal for us.", and every time mom would told me "Don't you see that mummy is busy for work? You should give me more understanding, you should grow up". So that, I was inculcated that woman with a successful career, strong and good looking appearance is everything since I was a child. Growing up in this kind of environment makes me a strong appearance and low self-esteem women. I have to be perfect in everything and I internalize my emotion and my needs, because "you should grow up". I deal with the sense of security and sense of identity when growing up, and of course until now. If feminism is about about a woman with so called strong appearance and perfect career in professional industry.I would rather be not a feminism. I think feminism is about women can do what they want, and what they don't want. Being a housewife could be a successful women too.

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("inculcate" is a good word, I almost never hear it.  And I hope I'm leading you right about how to use it, you might want to look for examples and think about it. It seems to be "inculcated with" "inculcate a" "inculcate you with")

So that,,since I was a child, I was inculcated with the idea that for a woman, with a successful career, strongstrength and a good looking appearance is everything since I was a child. ("since I was a child" is more natural at the beginning and it makes this emphatic sentence end with "everything" which sounds good.  Note that I changed all the attributes to nouns to be consistent. "strong" to "strength".  You could also say "I was inculcated with the idea that a woman with a successful career, strength, and a good looking appearance is everything"  You could also probably say "was everything" also, since that's the idea you "were" inculcated with, but its okay either way because the idea is present tense as you are inculcated with it. I think either "was/is everything".  That's a point for a grammar expert possibly. But either way is definitely common usage.)Growing up in this kind of environment makes/made me a strong appearance and low self-esteem woman. (Its better without the "and" like literally with a slash "strong appearance/low self-esteem woman" like that's a type of woman)I have to be perfect in everything and I internalize my emotion(s) and my needs, because (I was told) "you should grow up".

I deal with the sense of security and sense of identity when growing up, and of course until now. (Not clear on this sentence.  Do you mean "I have dealt with issues with my sense of security and identity while growing up, and I still do"?  "until now" means that you have done it up until now and now you have stopped doing it.  "I deal with the sense of" is too abstract for something that seems like a personal concept "my sense of security".  "my" Also its typically "my insecurity" rather than "my sense of security", if you feel insecure.  "sense of security" sounds more like "security guards" or "computer security" or something.)

If feminism is about about a woman with a so-called strong appearance and perfect career in a professional industry, then I would rather not be not a feminist. I think feminism is about women can being able to do what they want, and not what they don't want. Being a housewife could be being a successful woman too.

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Most of the time, I would do my schoolwork and afternoon nap at different, and noisy places, and my lunch iswas a tasteless working meal. I would stay at mom's office or grandma's house until 9.30pm, and every time we would go back home and sleep very late. ("every time" doesn't make sense here. "until 9:30" that seems like its every day... "every time" just sounds strange with something like going home and sleeping.  I mean of course you do that every day? maybe "after, we would go back home"?) Home iswas a place that for sleep at night only. ("at night" is the normal time to sleep and the previous sentence is about after 9:30pm so...) When I was 12, mom sent me to a boarding school. I think one of the reasons iswas that she don'tdidn't have time to be with me and give me a lot of guidance, so boarding school iswas a good choice. You pay the fee/tuition, everything about educate a child's education [can be/is] settled. (Throughout here, its past tense, not present tense.  Where I use "I would do my" that could be replaced with "I did my", "would" is kind of like a past example, you'll have to consult an English grammar book for more on that.)


I still remember that, when I was still a kid, every night when we gowent back to our house, I would ask my mom in the car"mummy, can you please don'tnot go to work tomorrow, we can stay at home, I don't want to go any place, I just want to be with you and stay at home , and you can cook a meal for us.", and every time mom would toldtell me "Don't you see that mummy is busy forwith work? You should give mebe more understanding, you should grow up".("would tell" because "would" already places it in that weird past tense thing, "would told" is not a phrase.)


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What is Ivanka feminism?

Recently I've been working with some investment bankers. ("a banker" "some bankers" "some banker" means some not specific banker)One of the/my coworkers (if they're not your "my coworkers", then they're not "coworkers" instead "employees" as of the bank) told me that his department (IBD) only havehas menmale employees, no womenfemale employees, none at all. One of the reasons ("One of", there's more than one reason, reasons) is that the manager thinks that women couldn't endure the heavy workload and another reason is that some of the women have resigned when they havehad children.("men employees" "women employees" is okay, but not great.  "that some of the women resign when they have children" is also sort of okay, but not great.)

I think what you think is I am going to say is that women should have equal rights. I am sorry to disappointing you, (but) this is not my point today. (Or "You probably think I'm going to say that women..." "I think that you think I'm going to say that women...")
I would like to express my view of female workers from my childhood memory/memories. When I was a child, my mom iswas smart, sharp, and a good looking business woman.("a" "good looking" because of "business woman"). She was always at work, so every time I finished school, my chauffeur comecame and took me back to mom's office or grandma's house; I always refused to go back to our house because only the Indonesian nanny would be there with me.
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I think feminism was invented by a bunch of stoners who figured out they could get laid if they made women feel "empowered". No, I'm kidding, that's a little harsh. But I have to say, women in America are really nuts and most relationships between men and women are terrible. I just saw a book "Strong is the new Pretty" with this girl on the cover. So what, are women all strong and ugly now and the men are pretty and weak? Feminism just often goes too far beyond equal rights into confused gender roles and women who want to be more male than the men, but often still with contradictory desires to be protected and taken care of.
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