I wish I could be free like a bird!
When I was a child, I never felt I was bound by anything. I could laugh, cry and play and do what I liked to do anytime. With my growing up, I feel be more and more bound by reality. As I have been an adult , Lots of responsibilities I have to take. Lots of things, even some things that I don't like to do . I still have to do . So sometimes life becomes a little boring.
I don't like this situation. I try to break it and try to find some interesting things to do. Sometimes they works, sometimes not .Sometimes I feel frustrated. I don't know how to change this situation. I wish I could be back to childhood and stay away from all the boring things. But I know, it is only a dream. I can't be a child again.
Life is a lane but it is rotative course. Maybe when I am old, I would feel completely free again.
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I wish I could be free like a bird!
When I was a child, I never felt I was bound by anything. I could laugh, cry and play and do what I liked to do anytime. Growing up, I felt more and more bound by reality. As an adult I have lots of responsibilities to take. Lots of things, even some things that I don't like to do I still have to. So sometimes life becomes a little boring.I don't like this situation. I try to break it and try to find some interesting things to do. Sometimes it works, sometimes not . Sometimes I feel frustrated. I don't know how to change this situation. I wish I could go back to my childhood and stay away from all the boring things. But I know, it is only a dream. I can't be a child again.
Life is a road but it is windy course. Maybe when I am old, I will feel completely free again.
Or you could say "The road of life is windy"
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I wish I could be free like/as* a bird !
When I was a child, I never felt I was bound by anything. I could laugh, cry and play, and do what I liked (to do) any time/all the time. [With my]/Since growing up, I feel (myself to be) more and more bound by reality. As I have been an adult , there are so many/[lots of] responsibilities I have to take - lots of things, even some things that I don't like to do, I still have to do . (So) sometimes life becomes a little boring.I don't like this situation. I try to break free of/away from it and (try to) find some interesting things to do. Sometimes they this works, sometimes not .Sometimes I feel frustrated. I don't know how to change [this]/the situation. I wish I could [be]/go back to childhood and stay away from all the boring things. But I know, it is only a dream. I can't be a child again.
Life is a [lane]/path [but it]/that goes full circle/is rotative and its course [rotates]/is circular. Maybe when I am old, I would will feel completely free again.
* there is an expression 'free as a bird'
Well expressed, and well written, 娜 安.
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Thank you , Janci. Yes, maybe you are right.
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You can be a child every time if you want I think :)
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Thank you Sangar. I agree with you , yeah we all should enjoy current life and be positive about life.
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