The snow storm
Today is the snow storm day, and today is a no school day. ( I already said this is a snow storm day) It because the snow is to big!
The normal snow we will go to school but it is not a normal snow, so we stay home too. When we stay home I here the sound of the wind and the sound of the snow fall of the tree. It is very loud.
In my home I learn Math.M and when i finish learning I go down stair to play lop top,I play “Tanki online “(>=<)(I got a “Firebird XT M3”.
After lunch i go to my room to get a nap. After this nap i want to clean the snow out of my out door stairs.
If there has some mistake please fix it thanks.
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The snow storm
Today is the snow storm day, and today is a no school day. ( I already said this is a snow storm day) It because the snow is to big!There is no school today because of the big snow storm.
The normal snow we will go to school but it is not a normal snow, so we stay home too.
When there is only light snow, we go to school. However, this is not the case today, so we stay home instead.
When we stay home I here the sound of the wind and the sound of the snow fall of the tree. It is very loud.
At home I can hear the sound of the wind, the snow, and the loud thud of a falling tree.
In my home I learn Math.M and when i finish learning I go down stair to play lop top,I play “Tanki online “(>=<)(I got a “Firebird XT M3”.
Inside, I study Math. When I finish I go downstairs to play Tanki Online on my laptop.
After lunch i go to my room to get a nap. After this nap i want to clean the snow out of my out door stairs.
After lunch I go to my room to take a nap. Then I clean the snow off of my front steps.
If there has some mistake please fix it thanks.
If there are some mistakes, please fix them. Thanks.
I provided examples of correct grammar, however there are other forms of expression that would still be acceptable. Overall, you did a good job. :)
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The snow storm
Today there is a blizzard and no school. ( I already said that this is a snow storm day) It is because the snowfall is so heavy!With normal snow we can go to school but this is not normal snow, so we stay home. When we stay home I hear the sound of the wind and the sound of the snow falling off the tree. It is very loud.
In my home I learn mMath and when Ii finish learning I go down stairs to play on the lap top. I play “Tanki online “(>=<)(I have a “Firebird XT M3”.
After lunch iI went to my room for a nap. After that iI cleaned the snow out off my doorsteps.
If there were any mistakes please fix them, thanks.
Very well written!
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The snow storm
Today is the snow storm day, and today is a no school day. ( I already said this is a snow storm day) It is because the snowstorm is too big! ("A big snow" "A big snowstorm" "there is too much snow")The normal snow we will go to school but it is not a normal snow, so we stay home too. When we stay home I herehear the sound of the wind and the sound of the snow falling from of the trees. It is very loud.
In my home I learn Math.M and when i finish learning I go downstairs to play on a/my laptop. I play “Tanki online “(>=<)(I got a “Firebird XT M3”.
After lunch i go to my room to gettake a nap. After this nap i want to clean the snow out of my outdoor stairs. ("clean the snow off the steps/stairs" "clean the snow out of my boots")
If therethis has some mistakes please fix itthem thanks.
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