An Interesting Advertisement

Today , if you want to watch some videos on the internet , you have to spend a significant amount of time watching advertisements at the beginning or in the middle of the video. This always drives me crazy (or are you referring to you and someone else you watch with, in which case "us" is correct? If you are referring to people in general, you  could say "This normally drives most people crazy") , because the advertisements are quite long. No matter how long the video you see is, you need to watch about three minutes or more of advertisements.

However, I saw an interesting advertisement on the biggest video website in China several months ago. At the beginning , there was only one simple word on the screen, written as RIO. RIO is a beverage brand name. And there was an attractive male voice which said: "RIO are the sponsors of this video, which has no advertisements. " And then, I can see the video immediately. There really were no advertisements. That surprised me and I was at once impressed with RIO. 

I think this advertisement is interesting, because it helped me cut a lot of advertising time, which most people hate . The advertiser of RIO is very clever. They are able to understand customer psychology and utilize this to improve their image.

An Interesting Advertisement

Today, if you we want to watch some a video on the internet, you we have to see a long time advertisements in at the beginning or in the middle of the video. This always drive us crazy, because the advertisements are quiet long. No matter how long the video you see is, you we still have to see about three minutes or more than it of ads.

However, I saw an interesting advertisement on the biggest video website in China several months ago. At the beginning, there was only some a simple word on the screen: ,written RIO. RIO is an beverage, and there was an attractive male voice that said, by a man , "RIO had has been named the sponsors of this video. There are no advertisements. " And then, I can see saw the video immediately. There was really weren't any no advertisements. That left me surprised, and I was impressed with RIO promptly immediately.

I think this advertisement is interesting because it helps me cut much advertising time which that most people hate it . The advertisers of RIO is are very clever. They can catch the customers' psychology to improve their image.

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