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what do your mind ? i haved a long day. it's tired. i worked all the day. when i open my massage, my friend said my crush don't like me. she poor me. she said i don't have lot of money and i'm not handsome so her don't like me but i don't understand why she make me belive in this love. i'm so sad.

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What do your   think mind ?

i haved a long day. it's tired. i worked all the day. when i open my massage, my friend said my crush don't like me. she poor me. she said i don't have lot of money and i'm not handsome so her don't like me but i don't understand why she make me belive in this love. i'm so sad.

I have had a long day.  I am tired,  I worked all day.  When I opened my messages, my friend had written that my crush doesn't like me.  She said that I don't have a lot of money, that I'm not handsome  and that she doesn't like me.  I don't understand why she made me believe in our love.  I'm so sad.

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What is on do your mind ?

I (<--"I" is always capitalized.) haved had a long day. it's I'm tired. I worked all the day. When I opened (<--This event already happened, so use past tense.) my messages (<--"massage" = xoa bóp), my friend said my crush don't doesn't like me. She thinks I'm too poor me. She said I don't have lot of money and I'm not handsome, so her don't she doesn't like me. but I don't understand why she make made me believe in this was love. I'm so sad.

I'm sorry to hear about your rough day, Five. I hope you'll feel better tomorrow. In the meantime, please let me know how I can continue helping you with your English =)

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what do your mind ? 
What's on your mind?

i haved a long day. it's tired.
I have had a long day. I'm tired.

i worked all the day.
I worked all day.

when i open my massage, my friend said my crush don't like me.
When I opened my message, my friend said my crush doesn't like me.

she poor me.
She says I'm poor (?) 
She pities me (?)
I'm not sure what you want to say. 

 she said i don't have lot of money and i'm not handsome
so her don't like me but i don't understand why she make me belive in this love. i'm so sad.
so she doesn't like me, but I don't understand why she led me on.
To lead someone on means to make them think they like you, but they are playing, or using you. I'm assuming this is what you mean by her making you believe that you both had mutual feelings. 

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wWhat do is on your mind?

i haved I've had a long day. it's I'm tired. i I worked all the day. w When I open looked at my massage messages, my friend said that my crush don't didn't like me. She thinks I'm too poor me. She said I don't have lot of money and I'm not handsome, so her she doesn't like me, but i don't understand why she make me believe in this love that she does. I'm so sad.

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