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Hi everyone!
My name is Lisandro and I am from Argentina. I bornt in Buenos Aires, in the neighborhood of Recoleta.
This morning I got up at 10 o'clock AM and I thought to write this text in this great language, the English. I'm enjoying the last day of my holidays because tomorrow I'm going to start the classes at the university. I'm studying International trade degree at the Museo Social Argentino University and this year is the last. If all go well, in July or August I'm going to finish the degree. I am looking forward to get it.
In this moment, I am in the house of my mother in a village called Cañuelas. It is located in Buenos Aires province, near to Ezeiza International Airport. I have never been in this house in summer. I travelled around the village in January. It is really large and It has shedloads of place to visit, such as the historical station of train and La Martona's country house. My mother is very glad here because she wanted to live here since 1998, when she bought the piece of land to build the house.
In this village, we'd like to start our enterprise which It is going to have a relation with the fur market.
Another day, I will continue to write more about the enterprise. At the moment, that's all.
Bye bye!
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My first text on the italki website
Hi everyone!My name is Lisandro and I am from Argentina. I was born in Buenos Aires, in the neighborhood of Recoleta.
This morning I got up at 10am and I thought to write this text in this great language, English. I'm enjoying the last day of my holidays, because tomorrow I'm going to start classes at the university. I'm studying for an International trade degree (you can say "I'm studying International Trade", or "I'm studying for an International trade degree") at the Museo Social Argentino University and this year is my last. If all goes well, I'm going to finish the degree in July or August (alt: I will finish the degree in July or August, if all goes well). I am looking forward to getting it.
At this moment, I am in my mother's house, (what you have written is not wrong, but normally the shorter version "my mother's house" would be used, rather than "in the house of my mother") in a village called Cañuelas. It is located in Buenos Aires province, near to Ezeiza International Airport. I have never been in this house in Summer (seasons require capitalization). I travelled around the village in January. It is really large and It has shedloads of places to visit, such as the historical train station and La Martona's country house. My mother is very happy here because she has wanted to live here since 1998, when she bought the piece of land to build the house.
In this village, we'd like to start our enterprise, which will be related to the fur market.
Another day, I will continue to write more about the enterprise. At the moment, that's all.
Bye bye!
Well written!
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My first text on the Italki website.
Hi, everyone!My name is Lisandro, and I am from Argentina. I was born in Buenos Aires, in the neighborhood of Recoleta.
This morning I got up at ten o' clock AM, and I thought I would write this text in the grand language of English. Tomorrow I'm going to start my classes at my university, so I'm enjoying the last day of my holidays. (Squinting modifier. It was unclear as to what you were referring to grammatically. :) ) I'm studying for an International Trade degree at the Museo Social Argentino University and this year is my last. If all goes well, I will receive my degree in July or August. I am looking forward to getting it.
At this moment, I am in my mother's house in a village called Cañuelas. It is located in a Buenos Aires province, near the Ezeiza International Airport. I have never been to this house during summertime. I traveled to the village in January. It is really large, and it has lots of places to visit, such as the historical train station and La Martona's country house. My mother is very happy here because she wanted to live here since 1998 (Comma splice)when she bought this piece of land to build the house.
In this village, we'd like to start our enterprise which will have a relation with the fur market.
On another day, I will continue to write more about the enterprise. At the moment, that is all.
Bye bye!
This was nicely written, and it is understandable even with errors. Keep learning! :)
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