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Two important dates in my life The first important date in my life was interesting because I had visited my grandfather's house in Rio de Janeiro, for me that was amazing and I remember telling my grandfather that I loved him, and I visited many places there and my mother bought many interesting things. The second important date in my life was when my sister was born and give us enjoy. That date my uncle was take us at hospital and was special to me and my family. But year later my uncle unfortunatelly was died by the ill cancer and I was very sad.

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Two important dates in my life

The first important date in my life was interesting because I had visited my grandfather's house in Rio de Janeiro. For me that was amazing and I remember telling my grandfather that I loved him, and I visited many places there and my mother bought many interesting things.
The second important date in my life was when my sister was born and give us enjoy gave us joy. That date On that day my uncle was take us at took us to the hospital and it was special to me and my family. But a year later my uncle unfortunately was died by the ill from cancer and I was very sad.

I'm sorry to hear about your uncle, but at least you have that happy memory of the two of you togeter!

Note the difference between these two words:

enjoy (v) - to like something very much / to have a good time, e.g. I enjoy reading novels. Are you enjoying the party?

(n) enjoyment

joy (n) - a feeling of happiness    e.g. Kids can be difficult, but they are a joy to have.  Her heart was full of joy.

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Two important dates in my life

The first important date in my life was interesting because I had was visiting my grandfather's house in Rio de Janeiro. For me, that was amazing, and I remember telling my grandfather that I loved him. and I visited many places while there, and my mother bought many interesting things items.

The second important date in my life was when my sister was born, and giving us enjoy. That date day, my uncle was take took us at to the hospital, and it was special to me and for my family and me. But However, a year later, my uncle unfortunately was died by the ill from cancer, and I was very sad.

Nicely written, Patrick. I'm sorry to hear about your uncle, but I do hope your sister will continue to bring your family joy forever =)

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Two important dates in my life

The first important date in my life was interesting because I had visited my grandfather's house in Rio de Janeiro, for me that was amazing and I remember telling my grandfather that I loved him, and I visited many places there and my mother bought many interesting things.
The second important date in my life was when my sister was born and gave us enjoy. That date my uncle was taken to the hospital and it was special to me and my family. But one year later my uncle unfortunately was died of cancer and I was very sad.

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