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Panda Diplomacy( Part 1) The history of pandas can date back 8 million years. Unfortunately, ancient pandas in Europe didn’t survive during the Ice Age and became extinct. Now pandas can be only found inside China because the complicated terrain in China at that time stopped the ice expanding and helped the revolution of pandas. About 70% percent of pandas are living in Sichuan Province. China has put a lot of finance to protect pandas. According to a survey in 2013, gladly, the number of wide pandas were increased to 1864 and the number of captive panda were increased to 375. Pandas are still endangered animals because many of them suffer from reproductive problems. In order to raise the people’s attention to protect and love pandas, one of the Chinese nature reserves specially sets up an account on internet, broadcasting them.

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Panda Diplomacy( Part 1)

The history of pandas can be dated back 8 million years. Unfortunately, ancient pandas in Europe didn’t survive during the Ice Age and became extinct. Now pandas can be only be (sounds more natural) found inside China because the complicated terrain in China at that time stopped the ice expanding and thus helped the revolution of pandas.

About 70% percent of pandas are living in Sichuan Province. China has put up a lot of finance to protect pandas. According to a survey in 2013, gladly thankfully, the number of wide wild pandas were increased to 1864 and the number of captive panda were increased to 375. Pandas are still an endangered animals species because many of them suffer from reproductive problems. In order to raise the people’s (depends on what you mean) attention awareness and to encourage the protection and love of pandas, one of the a Chinese nature reserves has specially sets up an account on the internet, broadcasting them.

'in' vs 'inside' SEE BELOW LINK  

http://www.englishleap.com/common-mistakes/in-and-inside

'put up'

http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/put-up

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