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An unforgettable walk Some years ago I traveled to Huancayo with two friends.It took six hours from Lima.When we arrived , we went to the main square and looked for some hotel.The next day we took a tour to Huaytapallana mountain.We had to walk for two hours for reaching to the top of the mountain.During the walk we saw beautiful landscapes and lagoons.When we reached to the top, I was very exhausted but, at the same time I was very satisfied for achieving my goal.The climb to Huaytapallana mountain was more difficult than the descent. Nonetheless,it was one of my best experiences of my life and I'll never forget it.If you want to take a tour to Huaytapallana mountain, I advise you taking comfortable trekking shoes and being in good shape for reaching to the top.

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An unforgettable walk

Some years ago, I traveled to Huancayo with two friends. It took six hours from Lima.When we arrived, we went to the main square and looked for a hotel.The next day we took a tour to Mount Huaytapallana. We had to walk for two hours for reaching to reach the top of the mountain. During the walk we saw beautiful landscapes and lagoons. When we reached to the top, I was very exhausted but, at the same time, I was very satisfied for at achieving my goal. The climb to up Mount Huaytapallana was more difficult than the descent. Nonetheless, it was one of my the best experiences of my life and I'll never forget it. If you want to take a tour to Mount Huaytapallana, I advise you taking to take comfortable trekking shoes and to be being in good shape for reaching if you want to reach the top.

 

Notes: 1. Leave a space at the end of each sentence.

2. In English, we normally say 'Mount" before the name of a mountain peak. If the name refers to a mountain range, you can say  the name followed by "Range" or followed by "Mountains". for example the "Rocky Mountains" or the "Wyoming Range". You may not be wrong in saying "Huaytapallana Mountain", but it sounds a little strange. In this case, the name of the highest peak is the same as the name of the range, so you could say "Mount Huaytapallena" to refer to the peak, or "Huaytapallana Mountains" or the "Huaytapallana Mountain Range" to refer to the range.

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An unforgettable walk

Some years ago I traveled to Huancayo with two friends.It took six hours from Lima.When we arrived , we went to the main square and looked for some a hotel.The next day we took a tour to Huaytapallana mountain.We had to walk for two hours for reaching to reach the top of the mountain.During the walk we saw beautiful landscapes and lagoons.When we reached to the top, I was very exhausted but, at the same time I was very satisfied for achieving my goal.The climb to Huaytapallana mountain was more difficult than the descent. Nonetheless,it was one of my the best experiences of in my life and I'll never forget it.If you want to take a tour to Huaytapallana mountain, I advise recommend you taking to wear comfortable trekking hiking shoes and being in a good shape for in order to reaching to the top.

very nice :)

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