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I hate crowded train I hate boarding a crowded train.l smell various scents and feel sick. I want to alight from the train quickly emoji]

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I hate crowded train

I raiding crowded train.l smells various and feel sick. I wanna get out train early[emoji]

Hi Kosei, 

"raiding" means a sudden attack on a place. 

I raiding crowded train  (I hate boarding a crowded train. / I hate commuting on a crowded train.)

l smells various and feel sick ("various" is adjective. It should be used with a noun. I smell various body scents (noun phrase) and feel sick.)

I wanna get out train early. (Try to avoid slangs. I want to alight from the train quickly.)

Hope this helps.

Cheers, 
Lance

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I hate crowded trains

I raiding am riding a crowded train.l smells various things and feel sick. I wanna get out of train early[emoji]

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