Toxic Parents I am reading Toxic Parents. The contents shocked me. Did my parents give me negative judgment? Did the family logistic effect my life? Have I been trapped in the education of my parents?

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Toxic Parents I am reading Toxic Parents. The contents shocked me. Did my parents give me negative judgment? Did the family logistic effect my life? Have I been trapped in the education of my parents? When we don't know what should we do, how can we figure out what can we do?

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Toxic Parents

I am reading Toxic Parents.

The contents shocked have shocked me. Did my parents give me negative judgment? Did the family logistic logic effect my life? Have I been trapped in the education of my parents? When we don't know what should we do, how can we figure out what can we do?

Hi There! Here are my corrections and some suggestions on how to phrase things differently, let me know if you have any questions about them!

Toxic Parents

I am reading a book called (you can add this if it is the first time that your readers have been introduced to the book)'Toxic Parents' and (maybe better to join the two sentences together here to make it flow better) the contents have (present perfect is best here because you are still reading the book. It changes to past simple tense when you finish reading it)shocked me. Did my parents see me in a negative light? give me negative judgment? Did the way in which my family was set up affect logistic effect my life? Have I been trapped in the education of my parentsby the way my parents have brought me up / by my parents' propaganda (this alternative is a lot stronger)? When we don't know what we should(switch to normal word order after 'we don't know what..') we do, how can we figure out what to can we do?

Toxic Parents

I am reading Toxic Parents.

The contents shocked me. Did my parents give me negative judgment? Did the family logistic logic effect my life? Have I been trapped in the education of my parents? When we don't know what we should we do, how can we figure out what can we do?

I wouldn't worry too much about it, Shane. Of course our parents have/had an influence on us. Take what you've learned from them and find your own path =)

Good entry. it was very grammatically accurate.

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