I go to the pool
The spring is coming and I've decided come back to the pool everyday. It's hard because I get up early at the morning and go to walk about an hour between the rice fields. Of course currently they're dry but soon will open the river doors and the water will flood the land.
When I arrive to the pool I feel tired but I need to do it if I want to take care my body. I swim 80 pools which it's about one thousand metres. 20 minutes changing crawl with breast-stroke. Not bad.
I leave my pool and come back home walking as fast as I can.
If I want to change my mind I need to make it along 21 days. After that, it will be a routine and everything will be easy.
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I go to the pool
The Spring is coming and I've decided come to go back to the pool everyday. It's hard because I get up early at in the morning and go to for a walk for about an hour between among (or through) the rice fields. Of course currently they're dry but soon they will open the river doors and the water will flood the land.When I arrive to at the pool I feel tired but I need to do it if I want to take care of my body. I swim 80 pools lengths which it's is about one thousand metres. 20 minutes changing (or mixing) crawl with breast-stroke. Not bad.
I leave my pool and come back home walking as fast as I can.
If I want to change my mindset I need to make it along through 21 days. After that, it will be a routine and everything will be easy.
Very good Carles. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue and grey.
A "length" of a pool is when you swim from one end to the other end. I think this is what you meant to say.
"Change my mind" = cambiar de opinión.
"Change my mindset" = cambiar la mentalidad (I think this is what you intended to say)
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I Go to the Pool
Spring is coming and I've decided to go swimming at the pool every day again. It's hard because I get up early in the morning and go to walk about an hour between the rice fields. Of course currently they're currently dry but soon will open the river doors will be opened and (the) water will flood the land.When I arrive at the pool I feel tired, but I need to do it/this if I want to take care of my body. I swim 80 lengths of the pools, which is/equals about one thousand metres. 20 minutes changing between the front crawl and breaststroke. Not bad. I leave the pool and come back home walking as fast as I can.
If I want to make this a habit, I need to keep going for 21 days. After that, it will be a routine, and everything will be easy.
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I go to the pool
The spring is coming and I've decided come back to the pool everyday. It's hard because I get up early in the morning and go to walk about an hour between the rice fields. Of course currently they're dry but soon they will open the river doors and the water will flood the land.When I arrive to the pool I feel tired but I need to do it if I want to take care of my body. I swim 80 pools which it's about one thousand metres. 20 minutes changing crawl with breast-stroke. Not bad.
I leave my pool and come back home walking as fast as I can.
If I want to change my mind I need to do it along 21 days. After that, it will be a routine and everything will be easier.
= what I changed. You use at when it is specific like when you use hours. When not, use in for general/ bigger time. You use make when you create something and you use do about an activity.
= what I added. If you do not put they, it sounds like the rice fields will open the river doors itself.
= I thing it sound better. You said in beginning that it is being hard, so it sound better if you say that it will be easier.
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