2017.3.7 please help me
Today is wonderful day. I will go back to my home. Good weather makes me comfortable. I will go to cinema watch movie with my girlfriend and eat some delicious foods, I got up early than I toke shower. I got to bus station waited bus about twenty minutes it's so boring. Finally the bus arrived. I want to give my girlfriend a surprise I bought a box of chocolates for her but she didn't know anything. She loved this chocolates so much. Today was wonderful day
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2017.3.7 please help me
Today is a wonderful day. I will go back (to my) home. Good weather makes me comfortable. I will go to the cinema, watch a movie with my girlfriend and eat some delicious foods,. I got up early thanthen I toketook a shower. I got to the bus station, waited for the bus about twenty minutes. it'sIt was so boring. Finally the bus arrived. I want to give my girlfriend a surprise so I bought a box of chocolates for her but she didn't know anything. She loved thisthe chocolates so much. Today was a wonderful day"than" is comparison 比 "then" is a conjunction joining sentences... maybe like 还有
"She loved these chocolates" plural "these" because chocolates is plural, but only "this"/"these" when you're pointing to the thing and it is the most important part of the sentence.
"She loved these chocolates. They were very expensive."
versus
"She loved the chocolates. She was very happy."
Both "the" and "these" are okay but "the" sounds more natural.
Don't forget articles "a", "the"!
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