建康和身体
大夫说我不仅要打针，还要吃药。
不仅噢感冒了，而且我妈妈全身不舒服。
不管你咳嗽了还是血压不正常了，你要医院检查身体。
尽管我哥哥生病了，他的工作能力很大。
因为你不要是胖人，你要注意你的生材并且努力减肥。
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健康的身体
大夫说我不仅要打针，还要吃药。我不仅感冒了，而且我妈妈也全身不舒服。
不管你是咳嗽了还是血压不正常，你都要去医院检查身体。
尽管我哥哥生病了，他的工作能力很強。
如果你是胖子，你就要注意你的身材并且努力减肥。
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建康和身体
It's a wrongly written or mispronounced characters. should be change 健。
大夫说我不仅要打针，还要吃药。
不仅噢感冒了，而且我妈妈也全身不舒服。
噢is just a modal particle. Because the first sentence you mentioned you catch a cold and then your mother also felt bad. so. you ought to use 也 as a sign of repetition.
不管你咳嗽了还是血压不正常了，你要医院去检查身体。
医院 as a noun, it cannot produce a behavior by itself. so , there's need a verb to help it come into action.
尽管我哥哥生病了，但他的工作能力依旧很大。
但 just like "however" ,“依旧” it means just like before. To make the sentence more logic you should add it.
因为你不要是胖人，你要注意你的生材并且努力减肥。
This sentence isn't according with the customary expression of Chinese. you should change that 你不想变胖 or 不要变胖 more better. 身材 is just like someone figure but not 生材。
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Your wrote a character wrong in your title. 健 for 健康 while 建 for 建设.
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建康和身体
大夫说我不仅要打针，还要吃药。不仅我感冒了，而且我妈妈全身不舒服。
不管你咳嗽了还是血压不正常了，你都要去医院检查身体。
尽管我哥哥生病了，他的工作能力还是很强。
因为你不想长胖，所以你要注意你的身材并且努力减肥。
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