A bit about me
你好！
我是Kieren. 我快21岁.
我有6个哥哥我的爸爸和1个哥哥也学习中文。我的哥哥在台湾3个月。
我非常喜欢玩体育。可是我不太好打篮球篮球是我的最喜欢体育.
I'll type what I tried to say in English too so you know what I'm trying to say:
My name is Kieren. I'm almost 21 years old.
I have 6 brothers. My dad and one of my brothers are also learning Chinese. My brother is in Taiwan for 3 months.
I love to play sports. Although I'm not very good at it, basketball is my favourite sport.
If you can please explain to me my mistakes in English so I fully understand. Thanks guys!
谢谢！
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A bit about me
你好！我是Kieren. ( better one: 1: 我叫 Kieren, or 2: 我的名子是 Kieren. ) ,
我快21岁.:( 我快要 21-歲了， or 我快要滿 21-歲了）
我有6个哥哥：（我有 6-位 哥哥）
我的爸爸和1个哥哥 （ 他們 兩人 ） 也（正在） 学习中文。
我的哥哥在台湾3个月（了）。
我非常喜欢玩体育。（ 我非常喜歡我運動）
可是（ 雖然= though , although) 我不太好(會）打篮球； 但是， 篮球是我的最喜欢的 （運動） 体育.
I'll type what I tried to say in English too so you know what I'm trying to say:
My name is Kieren. I'm almost 21 years old.
I have 6 brothers. My dad and one of my brothers are also learning Chinese. My brother is in Taiwan for 3 months.
I love to play sports. Although I'm not very good at it, basketball is my favourite sport.
If you can please explain to me my mistakes in English so I fully understand. Thanks guys!
谢谢！
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hello~ kieren,nice to meet you.
我有6个哥哥,我的爸爸和其中1个哥哥也学习中文。我的哥哥在台湾待了3个月。我非常喜欢运动。可是/虽然（maybe use "虽然"will better）我不太擅长，篮球是我的最喜欢的运动（体育运动）.
sport →运动、体育运动
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A bit about me
你好！我是Kieren. 我快21岁了.
我有6个哥哥，我的爸爸和1个哥哥也在学习中文。我的哥哥在台湾3个月了。
我非常喜欢体育运动。尽管我的篮球打的不太好，但是打篮球是我最喜欢的体育运动.
I'll type what I tried to say in English too so you know what I'm trying to say:
My name is Kieren. I'm almost 21 years old.
I have 6 brothers. My dad and one of my brothers are also learning Chinese. My brother is in Taiwan for 3 months.
I love to play sports. Although I'm not very good at it, basketball is my favourite sport.
If you can please explain to me my mistakes in English so I fully understand. Thanks guys!
谢谢！
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A bit about me
你好！我是Kieren。(<--Chinese periods are hollow circles, not dots.)我快21岁了。(<--In this case, 了 is used to indicate something is about to change.)
我有6个哥哥。我的(<--Typically in Chinese, we do not put a 的 between ourselves and our family members.)爸爸和1个哥哥也在学习中文。我的哥哥现在在台湾3个月。(<--在 is used to indicate something is currently happening, and 现在 means it's happening right now.)
我非常喜欢玩参加体育运动。(<--We cannot "play" sports in Chinese. We can "participate in sports activities/exercises.")可是我不太好打虽然我篮球打得不太好，但是篮球是我的最喜欢的体育。(<--Pay attention to how Chinese orders its parts of speech. Literally, this says "even though I basketball play not too good, but basketball is my most liked sport.)
谢谢！
Not bad, Kieren! Did you just start learning Mandarin not too long ago? Please feel free to seek me out if you have any more questions =)
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