I am now in Bali !
Could you please make these sentences more natural??
Now I'm in Bali, Indonesia !
Last year on this day, Feb 28 2016, I got back home from my one year travel around the world. And today, Feb 28 2017, I step off Japan and come to Asia and Africa.
I got a job offer from a Japanese company, so suppose to start working there from this April. Before that, I have a month like a totally free vacation. That's the one reason why now I'm here !
Even though I still don't know what the best way for me is, I can say I met so many great people in my life so far, and that is exactly the reason why now I'm here. thank you all :)
February 27- April 2
•Bali 7days
•Rwanda 9days
•Ethiopia 6days
•Hong Kong 2days
•Japan 11days
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I am now in Bali !
Could you please make these sentences more natural??Now I'm in Bali, Indonesia !
Last year on this day, Feb 28 2016, I got back home from my one year travel around the world. And today, Feb 28 2017, I leave Japan and go to Asia and Africa.
I got a job offer from a Japanese company, so I'm supposed to start working there this April. Before that, I have a month that's like a totally free vacation. That's the one reason why I'm here now!
Even though I still don't know what the best way for me is, I can say I met so many great people in my life so far, and that is exactly the reason why I'm here now. Thank you all :)
February 27- April 2
•Bali 7days
•Rwanda 9days
•Ethiopia 6days
•Hong Kong 2days
•Japan 11days
"I step off in Japan and come to Asia and Africa" I don't understand this sentence. I picture you stepping off a plane in Japan, so how are you coming to Asia and Africa? "I leave Japan and go to Asia and Africa"? Okay, I get it.
Yeah, its good, except for that part, its pretty natural. You might say "the best way forward" instead of "the best way" or ""I still don't know where things are going", but its good the way it is.
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