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TIME IS GOLD This morning, I went out to deal with something and wanted to take taxi to arrive there because I believed "TIME IS GOLD". Unfortunately, I could not find any taxies in rush hours. So, I took the bus and I saw many bicycles which could be rented there when I got off. I decided to ride it to arrive the destination but failed because all the bicycles were broken. I had to walk and finally found a bicycle that could be used. It took me 20 minutes to arrive there. After dealed with the things, I went home by taxi and felt hungry. I ordered "Guotie" which is a chinese traditonal snack as my lunch meal. It's awesome!

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TIME IS GOLD

This morning, I went out to deal with something and wanted to take a taxi to arrive get there because I believed "TIME IS GOLD." (<--In English, we say "time is money." Is that what you meant?) Unfortunately, I could not find any taxis in during rush hours, so I took the bus and I saw many bicycles which that could be rented there when where I got off. I decided to ride it one to arrive get to the destination, but failed because all of the bicycles were broken. I had to walk and finally found a bicycle that could be used. It took me 20 twenty (It's best to write the words for numbers under 100.) minutes to arrive there.

After dealing with the things ("Thing" 这个词最好能不写就不写,应为听上去非常响哨儿用的词。) what I went there for, I went home by taxi and felt hungry. I ordered "guotie," (“锅贴” 的英文名字是 "pot stickers"。这名字是直接从 “锅贴” 这两个字单独的意思翻译出来的。) which is a Chinese traditional snack, as my lunch meal. It's awesome!


写得很好,lyffrank!你的英文水平很高! 有问题请别怕问 =)

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