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Bad thoughts vs good thoughts The whole text written below is a full total rave and reflects my attempt to come back to write texts in English language. This day I've noticed that bad thoughts in our mind stay longer in comparance with good ones. And I've wondered too much about it. And that's why I'm typing down the note. I don't think it's related with our brain activity or psychological trauma. My opinion is that it is connected with a power of our habit or willpower.Why? Because, as psychiatrists and researchers noticed, bad things (habits, behaviour, etc) are being fastened in our heads faster than bad ones. Try to remember easiness and calmness when a person does nothing and a lot of difficulties are being met by the person on one's own way when he/she tries to understand a difficult text, or tries to get up early in the morning because there are lot of tasks waiting for the person. And the opposite actions are wasting too much by watching TV all day or useless serfing internet during a few last hours. People should be able to switch their thoughts from bad to good ones quickly. Sure it's not easy, but quite achievable. I wanted to show above that good things come longer. Russian people say "To break is not to build. To build is not to break". I know if we will able to do over again ourselves, our kind of thinking will change. I'll be the first one starting kind of thinking and after some time ! will say "Good thoughts are stay longer than bad ones"

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Bad thoughts vs good thoughts

The whole text written below is a full total rave and reflects my attempt to come back to write texts in the English language.

This Today, I've noticed that bad thoughts in our mind stay longer in comparison with good ones, and I've wondered too much about it. And (It's best not to start sentences with conjunctions like "and." There's no rule against it, but it looks unprofessional.) That's why I'm typing down the this note.
I don't think it's related with to our brain activity or psychological trauma. My opinion is that it is connected with a the power of our habits or willpower. Why? Because, as psychiatrists and researchers noticed, bad things (When possible, avoid writing the word "thing." It looks childish.) traits (habits, behaviour, etc.) are being fastened in to our heads faster than bad good ones. Try to remember easiness and calmness when a person does nothing, and a lot of difficulties are being met by the person on one's own way when he/she tries to understand a difficult text or tries to get up early in the morning because there are lot of tasks waiting for the person. And The opposite actions are wasting too much by watching TV all day or useless surfing of the internet during a few last hours.
People should be able to switch their thoughts from bad to good ones quickly. Sure it's not easy, but it's quite achievable. I wanted to show above that good things traits come longer after some time. Russian people say "To break is not to build. To build is not to break." (In English, periods and commas always go inside quotation marks.) I know if we will are able to do start ourselves over again ourselves, our kind of thinking will change.
I'll be the first one to starting this kind of thinking, and after some time, I will say, "Good thoughts are staying longer than bad ones."

Nicely written, Ruslan! Not everything you wrote sounded fluid, but I was able to understand it all. You challenged yourself, and I like that!

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