Occasionally (help with corrections, please).
Occasionally i like to see as the car, motorcycles and the people go by the sidewalk of front of my home, I question me to where are they going, for what and why. Although i know that the answers are more simpl of that i imagine;I question me if these answers they mean for they that their dreams and goals, if that step they give in front me, takes them to somewhere that makes them happy. Because occasionally Idont know to where go to be.
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Occasionally (help with corrections, please).
Occasionally,* I like to see watching as the cars, motorcycles and the people go by the sidewalk of** in front of my home, I question me to wonder where are they are going, for what purpose and why.*** Although I know that the answers are more simpler of that than what I imagined, I question me wonder***** if these answers they mean for they that the answer is towards**** their dreams and goals; if that step they give take in front me, takes them to somewhere that makes them happy. Because occasionally I_don't know to where they are going (to) be.General note: I (yo) is always capitalized.
*Occasionally doesn't really work in this context. It implies a sort of exception, like "I usually do laundry on Friday, but I occasionally do it on Saturdays if I get home late."
**Cars and motorcycles don't go on the sidewalk, so it can't be grouped with "people" if you want to say "sidewalk".
***We go "towards" something, even if it's metaphoric like a goal.
****This sounds redundant because "for what purpose" already implies "why".
*****Preguntarse is "to wonder" in English.
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Agree, but I couldn't explain it as a grammatical point; it was more of an "it sounds more natural" thing. :)
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The word 'sometimes' might be better than 'occasionally'.
"Sometimes I like to watch cars, motorcycles and people pass in front of my home and wonder where where they are going, and why"
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