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Hometown -Where is your hometown? My hometown is Fukushima prefecture. It’s located north of Japan. It takes about one and half hours from Tokyo by shinkansen (high speed train). -Is it famous for anything? It became famous for place due to nuclear disaster after the tsunami following earthquake on 11 March 2011. it’s far between there to my parents house so it was okay. But there are some people who still don't go back to their house. -What are the interesting place to visit in your hometown? My hometown has an abundance of nature. There are some mountains, carving and lakes. I recommend lake Inawashiro. This lake is the third largest one in Japan. There are many ski resort and hot springs around there. -would you prefer to live in another place in Japan? I’m living in Tokyo by myself for around 15years. Living Tokyo is much better than my Hometown like country-side. There are lots of interesting things, place, people. Tokyo is full of excitements. One thing I can’t stand for many many people.

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Hometown

-Where is your hometown?

My hometown is Fukushima prefecture. It’s located north of in northern Japan. It's takes about one and half hours from Tokyo by shinkansen (high speed train).


-Is it famous for anything?

It became famous for place due to a nuclear disaster after a tsunami following the earthquake on March 11th, 2011. It’s really far  between from there the nuclear plant to my parents house, so it was okay. But there are some people who still don't can't go back to their houses.

-What are the interesting place to visit in your hometown?

My hometown has an abundance of nature. There are some mountains, carving (caves? Carving is the act of shaving wood. Caves are tunnels in rock, often quite large, but sometimes smaller) and lakes.
I recommend lake Inawashiro. This lake is the third largest one in Japan. There are many ski resort and hot springs around there.


-would you prefer to live in another place in Japan?

I've lived living in Tokyo by myself for around 15 years. Living in Tokyo is much better than my hometown like in the country-side. There are lots of interesting things, places, and people. Tokyo is full of excitements. However, one thing I can’t stand about Tokyo is the sheer number of people.

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Hometown

-Where is your hometown?

My hometown is in Fukushima prefecture. It’s located north of Japan. It takes about one and a half hours from Tokyo by Shinkansen (high speed train).


-Is it famous for anything?

It became a famous for place due to the nuclear disaster after the tsunami following the earthquake on 11 March 2011. it’s far The between there to My parents' house was far from the tsunami so it was okay. But However,there are some people who still don't go back to their house.

-What are the interesting place to visit in your hometown?

My hometown has an abundance of nature. There are some mountains, carving caves and lakes.
I recommend Lake Inawashiro. This lake is the third largest one in Japan. There are many ski resort and hot springs around there.


-would you prefer to live in another place in Japan?

I have been living in Tokyo by myself for around 15 years. Living in Tokyo is much better than my hometown which is rural like country-side. There are lots of interesting things, place and people. Tokyo is full of excitement. One thing I can’t stand would be the crowds. for many many people.
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Thank you, Mr.Lance and Elizabeth!
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I'm glad that your parents were safe when the earthquake occurred.

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